Date: May 05 2016 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 18: Heart and Sole
very interesting. so naughty.
i often think about these sorts of scenarios. when the victim get's closure with their abuser. at the same size again. in my mind i go right for the throat. Jack has been so effectively reconditioned that he's become a rare breed with depersonalization alongside his Stockholm Syndrome.
all good things come to an end but this story? WHY!?
Author's Response:
Jack is, essentially, going through a hyper-real version of stockholm syndrome in this story. Plus a general distortion of his reality. Fun stuff.
[Report This]Date: May 04 2016 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 18: Heart and Sole
I am assuming Carly goes full rage mode on the redhead when she can, no amount of army training can withstand JV captain rage.
Author's Response:
Carly is not going to be pleased with the redhead by the end of this story, let's say that.
[Report This]Date: May 04 2016 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 18: Heart and Sole
Amazing chapter, the reunion between Jack and Carly was great, it's nice to see them falling into their old ways so easily, you captured Carly's actions and reactions perfectly towards the end of this chapter, but I wonder if Jack will continue being accepting of what's happening to him, or try to resist. Either way, I'm eager to see what happens next. Poor Sophie though, I hope nothing too bad happens to her. Really great chapter, definitely worth the wait, but I hope we don't have to wait to long for the next one because you left us with a great ending scene and I'm eager to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
We'll definitely see some more struggle out of Jack in the next chapter, but it won't be an easy one. I plan to post the next chapter fairly soon.