Date: April 18 2016 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 1: Life After Carly
C'mon add some sexual stuff ! Play with like doll shit like that lol
[Report This]Date: April 17 2016 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 16: Foot Phile Phobia
Glad to more interaction with Sophie and hopefully we'll see some foot interaction with her and Jack soon. As always, thanks for the update and great work.
Date: April 16 2016 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 1: Life After Carly
Who's Leah? And how is she fighting the PMRD before its creation I am lost here!
Author's Response:
Leah is Jack and Carly's mom. They're not fighting the PMRD, they're fighting the chemicals that shrank Jack and Carly.
[Report This]Date: April 15 2016 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 16: Foot Phile Phobia
Jack is getting ready to have a breakthrough...*quietly waits for the suspenseful music of impending doom*
Author's Response:
Or maybe he's getting ready to have something else...
[Report This]Date: April 15 2016 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 16: Foot Phile Phobia
As is usual with your stories, I am super late to the party haha. This is another amazing story. I love all the detail you put into describing all of the ladie's feet. The characterization is fantastic as well. Seeing how Jack deals with aftermath of being Carly's slave is great. Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thanks very much. Glad you're enjoying it.
Date: April 12 2016 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 1: Life After Carly
family reunion hmmm... Silly us who thought Jack was gonna live in peace.
Author's Response:
That would've been very optimistic.
Date: April 10 2016 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 1: Life After Carly
You said final chapters...how many would that be?
P.s. you are a good writer, keep it up!
Author's Response:
Theoretically, 5. Don't quote me on that.
[Report This]Date: April 09 2016 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 15: Star of the Show
That confirms what i already guessed, that they went after Carly because it would bring less attention to the op.
Claire clearly knows that kidnapping Jack will bring complications.
Author's Response:
It will indeed, and probably even more complications than she's possibly accounted for...
[Report This]Date: April 09 2016 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 15: Star of the Show
Glad to see regular updates to this story. It seems like we will be close to a reunion between Jack and Carly, can't wait. Wonder how Sophie will fit into the mix with her being the target to get to Jack. Eager to see what's next, thanks for the chapter.
Author's Response:
Yes, we're getting close to the reunion. Thanks for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: April 09 2016 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 15: Star of the Show
The fetish side of me wants Carly to claim most of them by the end of this, maybe not a full blown Julia on the hunt but a Goddess and her small coven of devoteds.
The story reader in me enjoys the building to a fine crescendo.
Author's Response:
Carly and Julia do have some similarities, though by the end of this I think people may be a little more impressed with Carly even than Julia.
Date: April 04 2016 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 14: Freak in the Sheets
amazing chapter! you broke away to the shrink at the best part though ;)
i so hope you've got a backlog of this that will dribble out. you are an incredible writer.
Author's Response:
Gotta leave some things to the imagination. I don't quite have a backlog, but I do intend to slowly but surely finish this thing.
Date: April 04 2016 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 1: Life After Carly
Youre back! And updating stories left and right, YASSSSSS
Author's Response:
Hopefully I can keep up the pace.
[Report This]Date: April 02 2016 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 14: Freak in the Sheets
Shame on you Jack, SHAME!
Making poor Carly suffer like this...I mean...yeah...*quietly sees himself out*
Author's Response:
As tough as I've been on Carly in this story, I think you'll like a couple of the later chapters involving her.
[Report This]Date: April 02 2016 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 1: Life After Carly
Great update.
Author's Response:
Thanks much.
[Report This]Date: April 02 2016 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 14: Freak in the Sheets
Another great chapter!
You know, i am starting to wonder if Dr.Fenton isn't intentionally making these hallucinations go off the rails.
Though it could just be the PTSD.
Author's Response:
Ha. Fortunately, I'm not quite mean enough to make the doctor evil when Jack's already got so many other problems.
[Report This]Date: March 28 2016 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 13: Her Sex for Science
Glad to see you're back with an update and also glad to see Carly in all her domineering glory. I can't wait to see what happens next chapter with Jack and his mom. Keep up the good work man.
Author's Response:
Thanks. Hopefully this new chapter satisfied that curiosity.
[Report This]Date: March 25 2016 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 13: Her Sex for Science
I'm glad you're back, Jacksmith! We look forward to the continuation of the story with Jack and his mom. You stopped writing this story the most interesting place, and disappeared for a few months :)
Author's Response:
Glad to be back.
[Report This]Date: March 25 2016 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 13: Her Sex for Science
So glad that you're back!
Michelle seems really nice, makes me wonder why she's working for Claire. I also wonder if Michelle also looks after June Young since she supposed to be in this lab too. If so, it's good to know June has someone nice taking care of her.
Author's Response:
I hope to make Michelle's purpose here a little clearer later on. Part of it is just that Claire knows how to get what she needs from people no matter what.
[Report This]Date: March 24 2016 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 13: Her Sex for Science
Carly still scary even at this size. Better take care, little bro.
Author's Response:
Carly's tough to shrink even if it's done physically.
Date: March 24 2016 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 13: Her Sex for Science
Good to see the return of the master manipulator.
Author's Response:
Glad she's being welcomed back.