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Reviewer: lilguyunderfoot Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: August 12 2015 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

very rough! you need to do some edits to clean up the mistakes!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: August 12 2015 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

A lot more separation of character dialogue and narrative text is needed.

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