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Reviewer: Exodia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 07 2021 12:58 AM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)

Any chance they'll be an update?

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: April 30 2016 6:59 AM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)

Sidney is growing well into the relationship he has with Persephone, she is no longer controlling him so tightly as she once did. I love that development!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: December 19 2015 6:40 PM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)

Persephone won't buy it but then again she has to,  she herself has no explanation on who was her mother and where she came from?  Loved it, especially Althea here rhere is something adorable about her. 

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: November 29 2015 8:19 AM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)

If you do get your own server and create your own website, send me an email. I want to post my stories there :)

Great to hear you will be finishing the story here and I really hope there are more additions to the site's features. 

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: November 26 2015 7:33 AM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)

I love this story,  would love to see you at least finish it here.  I wouldn't mind the new layout if the most recent,  featured  sections were still here.  Not to mention the top 10 lists,  its all gone!  Hopefully this layout is not the final version.  I got to say though I'll miss the shoutbox.  Wonder if stories will be read more now that the front page is missing the most recent display. 



Author's Response:

If you would like to know who the top ten most prolific reviewers are/were, I was sad enough to create a spreadsheet for that. All you'd have to do is update it regularly by going to each of the ten profiles of the people listed on it. I might even have an old screen shot somewhere, and the page might still exist even though all links to it have disappeared. You can e-mail me for that. One of these days, I'll have to buy myself a server and start my own website, and I'll make sure improves upon Giantess World, for a brief period my favourite website.

I've had a change of heart about this story, and I will not disrespect the reviewers by removing it from this website. I had hoped to have it completed by the New Years, but it now looks as if it will run into 2016. Fifteen chapters was a gross underestimate. I expect at least another four more chapters.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: October 10 2015 5:36 AM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)

Sorry for taking so long to review, busy with school tests. I think it doesn't matter how many people you seem to be writing for as long as those people give feedback, as long as you enjoy it.

Persephone and Althea were fun to read and that cliffhanger puts our hero in a very precarious situation. 



Author's Response:

The dreaded cliffhanger strikes again. You know, when I first added this story, I was worried I'd get bored of it. But I have not, and that amazes me. A couple more chapters, and it will be the longest story I've ever written.

I think about this story a lot. I cherish it. I've thought about it more than any other story I've written. I'd say give it another month and I'll have this story completed.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06 2015 3:32 PM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)

It's cool, there nothing wrong with fanservice, like you say, this IS a fetish site after all.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: October 05 2015 8:47 AM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)

So much fun, Perspehone seems more accessible in this one, probably because her adopted daughter is with her and her toy Sidney, who probably won a lot of points wit Perspehone for his last words to her. 



Author's Response:

I hear you. Hopefully he won big. He just needs to keep stroking that massive ego of hers and eventually she *might* think more of him. There next chapter should have some more action in it.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20 2015 7:45 AM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)

Wayne is one mysterious guy, he is now a key player in the fight against Eris and Nyx. 

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20 2015 1:53 AM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)

Yeah I forgot about Persophone's daughter, she wouldn't have been useful for a good chunk of time.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: September 13 2015 7:37 AM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)

If we're lucky, she might be in the mood for some Sidney. 



Author's Response:

You mean like, have sexy time with him? If I were in his situation, I'd be hoping for some compassion. Let's hope Sidney isn't used and abused.

Reviewer: GiantessLover122 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08 2015 7:17 AM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)

I checked out Giantess Love, and I noticed that Subiectum, an author here, had already posted one of his stories over there. Personally, I feel like I like the interface more than I like the one of giantesscity (I made an account) but giantessworld is still my favorite site, seeing that I'm more into the reading than the imagery.



Author's Response:

One advantage Giantess City has over other websites is that its content is not indexed by search engines. Search engines and the Internet Wayback Machine cannot get past the "Warning Page" that appears if you haven't signed in. This is handy for people who would like to publish their work, since posting your literature to the World Wide Web counts as it being publish. You can freely publish portions for review but never the entire thing.

 

I signed up to Giantess Love myself and one thing that annoys me is that I can't find a "sign out" button/hypertext. Apparently is was built from scratch but how can you miss out something as basic as a "sign out" button. Fortunately, I have my web browser delete all session cookies upon close.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08 2015 4:54 AM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)

Your cliffhangers are superb! I could definitely learn a thing or two from you when it comes to that. Endings are not my forte. Now we'll have to wait a week to see what happens to his ship.



Author's Response:

Well, I already discussed what's going to happen with you so you have an advantage. I'll try and get back to you with the next chapter as soon as possible. I generally find clifferhangers annoying since I hate having to wait, but I understand their value.

 

Have I really bene that goold with cliffhangers though? I can't recall having one at the end of every chapter. I'll take your word for it of course.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2015 3:15 AM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)

@GiantessLover122, you can still join. Its good for 3D renders and 2D drawings but not so big on stories. However, you can gain a new audience. 

As for this, loved how sexy you made Nyx and when Sidney realised how much bigger she was, it was the perfect ending for the chapter!



Author's Response:

Well now there is a new website, apparently, known as Giantess Love. Me personally (I'm somewhat stubborn), I'll be sticking to the old ways. Maybe I'll create an account, maybe I won't. Plus, I'd need to change my DNS to access it. Thanks for your feedback. The next chapter is in progress so I'll work on it over the weekend.

Reviewer: wwebby Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02 2015 3:50 PM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)

I still have yet to read the other chapters of your story, however, I am intrigued by the interaction of your characters and enjoy what is in this first!



Author's Response:

Well that's good. Let me know when you've read the next chapter! Hopefully you'll like them just as much.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: September 01 2015 12:41 AM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)

I'd love to hear how the story does there, was always curious to know how the giantess stories would fare outside of fetish sites.

I agree that City can be a frustrating experience, The Escape got a lot less reviews there except for a dedicated few whom I salute for following it to the end. 



Author's Response:

Well a quick search reveals BlackNaptune/Solar Crimson is present at Fiction Press, as are The Big Friendly Giantess series of stories. There's a page worth of stories thta include the word giantess in either their title or their description. Obviously, that would not give the full picture because this story (Gems of the Sky) would not show up by typing in the word "giantess" into the search.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: August 31 2015 6:57 PM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)

Thats the site for you, only a small percentage of authors will take an action to show they like your work, be it a review or favouriting you. Better than City though. Getting some response is better than none. 



Author's Response:

Yes, at the City I got even less attention; I regret sharing my stories there as they have been tossed aside. And then people wonder why most authors don't conclude their stories. A view is meaningless because it doesn't tell an author if their story was liked or not.

I might create an account on Fiction Press just to see if I'm recieved any better on there. Would be a good experiment - even if not a scientific one. They allow stories up to M, so I should be fine. I would assume this story is a 16+ (not 18+) though.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29 2015 5:12 AM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)

Last part I didn't see*

 

Overall I really enjoyed the dogfight, it had tension and now we get to the part where Sidney must choose his next move carefully or end up dead. 



Author's Response:

Ah yeah, there will be more life changing decisions to come I'm sure. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Hopefully Nyx is sexy too.

Reviewer: GiantessLover122 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28 2015 6:55 PM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)

Okay, so things I love about this story...

1. The plot building in the prologue.

2. An actual, legitimate reason for the giantesses/goddesses.

3. The long chapters.

4. Though I hate to say this, the cliffhangers.

5. The main character doesn't seem flat.



Author's Response:

Sounds reasonable. I will hopefully keep you interested with chapters to come. I noticed you haven't actually added any stories to your favourites list on Giantess World though. Did you know that if you do that you will get e-mails as soon as new chapters are posted? If you add favourite authors you'll get e-mails each time a new story is posted.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: August 27 2015 7:06 AM Title: Chapter Zero (Prologue)

The way she acts, the power she wields on top of that beautiful gigantic body. The kind of girl who knows how hot and sexy she is and thinks she can get the boys to do anything but likable to not make you hate her. You know its wrong but you kind of hope she'll notice you so that your existence will be acknowledged by her. That kind of sexy.

 

You can mention my name unless its to discuss unreleased work by me, stuff that should remain confidential until stated otherwise.



Author's Response:

Confusing, but I think I understand. I'll try and built upon that. Hopefully other giantesses can be as sexy as Eris. I'm not sure I would describe Eris the way you have though. She doesn't need the humans on the ship to do anything for her and is, I would say, bullying them. But the beauty of art, especially writing, is that it is open to interpretation. However I do see your point that she would be hard to truly hate by many.

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