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Reviewer: lancealot501 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2016 9:42 AM Title: Chapter Seven

So we find out that Wayne was in a similar position as Sidney and could have been what Sidney would eventually turn into if the angels didn't find him so important.
After saying that I don't think that I'm going to miss Wayne all that much. He seemed to be a 'information' character at best.

I was expecting to see more of Persephone and I wasn't disappointed in the least. You put the right amount of detail that just made the character 'pop' out to the reader. It was also nice to know that not all angels are monsters, sort of.
Now I want to know more about the angels. Are they a different species or are they actually humans that were specifically chosen by the goddess and transformed somehow into the giantessthey are now. I was also expecting her daughters to bigger slightly bigger than average if angels are artificially made.

Lastly I find it really ironic that the one Angel we know to have died was Nike the Greek goddess of victory herself.

Reviewer: HuzToru Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2015 8:05 AM Title: Chapter Seven

I wonder what happens next between Persephone and the main characher :? I really like this keep moving. Also are the other gts/angels on the ship tall as the main character or taller?



Author's Response:

Maybe Persephone and Sidney will have more sexy time? Or Maybe she'll him? Who knows? She seems like the most reasonable Angel right?

As a general rule there is one Angel (giantesss) per flagship. All of the gianteeses in the story are about the same height. Therefore, Sidney is always about twice as high as an Angel's big toe

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16 2015 4:59 AM Title: Chapter Seven

Great chapter! Some steamy scenes in this one! Also, I don't know if this has been answered yet but do angels need to eat in order to live? Do they need to eat humans to live? They CAN die as proven in this chapter with Nike dying, I wonder what it would take to kill one of them, I'm assuming it would have to be by another angel, but then who would kill Nike if Eris was upset about it and Nyx knew her?

That implies that an outside party killed Nike, maybe humans? Also we haven't seen male angels, and Persephone has the hots for Sidney, does that imply that angels need to mate with human males? This is a speculation on my part but I DO like Persephone, despite her lustfulness she seems like the most reasonable of the angels. She eats humans and DOES look down on them but in my opinion whereas Eris and Nyx see humans as roaches, Persephone sees them as cute little gerbils or hamsters or something like that...I wonder if my comparison made sense?

Anyway, great chapter, I'm looking forward to the next one!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your extended review. I have sent you an e-mail with answers to all of your questions. If anyone else has questions, or would like to see the answers I gave to gadgetmawombo, I will gladly provide answers.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16 2015 3:52 AM Title: Chapter Seven

Haha, what on Mars!

I guess its a natural evolution of our slang as humans spread out across the galaxy.



Author's Response:

The first instance of the phrase "What on Mars" was in chapter three (I just checked). You make it sound as though you've only just noticed the phrase. Anyways, thanks for the review.



Author's Response:

The first instance of the phrase "What on Mars" was in chapter three (I just checked). You make it sound as though you've only just noticed the phrase. However you touch upon an intersting point: People don't often consider slang in their stories. A giantess comes along and she starts speking exactly like an English human would and no consideration is given to slang terms.

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