Reviews For Jewels Of The Sky
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Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27 2015 1:32 PM Title: Chapter Nine

Reading your paragraph at the beginning made it seem like this chapter was gonma be boring but I didnt think so.



Author's Response:

Well look, I didn't think there was enough going on in this chapter. But apparently there was just enough. I should probably remove it, seeing as you're not the only person to comment on the chapter notes. Glad you like it.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27 2015 6:26 AM Title: Chapter Nine

  It wasn't boring, we got more things to think about like: Why doesn't Perspehone capture mining ships? Will Sidney be getting lucky tonight?



Author's Response:

Maybe Sidney will get lucky, but it might be a faustian bargain If he accepts. We'll just have to wait and to find out Persephone's reasons for ignoring some ships and not others. I wish I didn't know what was going to happen! It sucks that I'm the author.

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