Reviews For Jewels Of The Sky
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Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: February 24 2016 6:40 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen

Its not much a cliffhanger, as you pointed out but it is at least one where Sidney can relax just enough without worrying about someone dying.

Oh and you left this in here: (proofread to here) 

 

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: February 23 2016 6:39 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen

Methinks that Sidney wasn't expecting the ridiculous over the top lust that Persophone displayed here! I suppose everyone has their vices, for her, it's sex... Amazing stuff dude! I really enjoyed the chapter!

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