Reviews For Your Ray Gun
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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01 2015 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 1

Although I didn't like the frequent time skips, I thought it was an interesting read. Will we ever been the extratesstrials? I'd love to know how that ray gun got there. Surprised nobody saw him take it considering people would have known something crashed there; you'd think there would be lots of commoition around the crash sight.

Reviewer: acuteoblique Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 30 2015 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 1

Awesome!

Reviewer: paerslemone Signed [Report This]
Date: September 30 2015 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great story

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