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Reviewer: Sch Signed [Report This]
Date: June 21 2017 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 3. A Little Mouth to Mouth

Not a fan judging how my name is adam

Reviewer: gtsfan91 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: February 07 2016 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 3. A Little Mouth to Mouth

Why hasnt this like 1 star rating? The plot is total nonsense, the grammer is horrible and the chapters are like 200 words long. Why Are you Writing every 2nd word in every Sentence in Capital Letters? Stop That Please. Thank You



Author's Response:

um, you DO know that this is my first story on this site right? I'm merely a freaking beginner, and honestly, I thank you for the critisism, because it helps me improve.

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