Date: June 25 2016 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 9: The Final Chapter
I have but one question to the end of this amazing story.
What happened to Richard after he went back to the real world.
If you could make another story as a continuation I would be the happiest shrunken shadow in the world.
Author's Response:
First of all, thank you. As for continuation, I'm actually in the progress of writing a sequel right now. It's currently two chapters long (And on hiatus until I finish the current story I'm working on) but, it is planned and being worked on.
Date: April 14 2016 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 9: The Final Chapter
Angel could have been used but overall its a good entertaining story. I hope to see more! Demetria is very likable, she is a demon but with some redeeming qualities.
Author's Response:
Yeah, looking back Angel was somewhat under utilized. As for more, I do hope on eventually writing a sequel. As for Demetria's character, I once again thank you. It is happy to see you liked some of her qualities, as I did try to make her likable. Anyways, thank you for the reivew, I appreciate it.
Date: April 13 2016 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 9: The Final Chapter
That was a great ending for your story and anglexDemetria nice to see a couple out of two amazing characters hope to see them more in your other story's keep up the great work
Author's Response:
Thanks, I appreciate it. They may make an apperance again if I decide upon making a sequel. I've certainly left myself room to do so, and may be considering it in the future. Anyways, thanks for reading and thank you for the support all the way through. I appreciate it greatly.
Date: April 03 2016 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 8
I love your story keep up the work and the harpy sorta had carma or a back fire but I'm just happy they are going to save angle now probably
Author's Response:
Well that's the hopeful plan for the duo. I'm glad to know you like the story, and thanks once more for the review.
Date: March 22 2016 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 6
Well that's a way to end the chapter XD nice work vore is always nice so I like the chapter the friend ship angle and Demetria Have is really unique
Author's Response:
Thanks. I also agree that their relationship is pretty unique. Anyways, appreciate the review, hope you continue to enjoy the story.
[Report This]Date: March 22 2016 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
What a crazy chapter! Well done! Is this the end of the story, or is there something more that you have up your sleeve?
Author's Response:
Unfortunately I cannot quite disclose what the ending shall be. I appreciate your review, though you will have to wait until thursday to find out what happens to them. Once again, I very much appreciate the review, five stars is absolutely insane.
Date: March 16 2016 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 3
Well Vore at the end that was sorta of a surprise because I have not read the tags in a long time for your story I love this story I don't know why but I like angels and demons and mouth play so all of my favorite things in one hope to see more I think Im caught up with your uploads for the story I think your story is great sorry for making this so long and repetitive XD I just want you to know someone is reading your lovely story
Author's Response:
It's alright, I thank you for the review. Now, I don't know why but it gave me two copies of your review, so I'm going to delete the other copy I got, since I didn't actually have five, just four. Don't worry, there will be some mouthplay. Once again, I appreciate the review, glad to know you're enjoying the story.
Date: March 15 2016 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 2
Well Angel and Demetria have a lovely friend ship btw I enjoyed this chapter only thing I have to say is I need to catch up on this story because I now want to know what happens with are protagonist keep up the work I'll catch up with your latest chapters soon
Author's Response:
It's all good, also need to say that I do appreciate your review. Don't feel pressured to finish it right away, I'm fine with having you take your time. Anyways, thank you once again, and I hope you continue to find this story intriguing.
Date: March 10 2016 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
Your story seems very interesting hope to see more of the plot and to see how it will play out in the future of the story
Author's Response:
Thanks, I really appreciate the review, and you can be sure that it will take a fairly interesting turn in the future. Once again, glad you enjoyed it.
Date: March 08 2016 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
The premise is fun enough, a man trapped between the wrath of angels and demons. Plus your lead isn't all too likable, seems a bit of a prick but that will make everything more fun to read.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I appreciate the comment on the premise, and in terms of how character design will make it a bit more fun to read. Hopefully the series overall delivers in catching the readers interest. Thanks for your review, I quite appreciate it. Gotta say, I was somewhat worried about this chapter just being flat, but good to know at least some points made it seemingly interesting based upon the review.