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Reviewer: LittleBigPlanet Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 28 2023 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

'I was saving him for your first crush when you were older, but I won’t have my little girl be the only one without their first crush.' 

Luke's predicament reminds me of the pig who was raised from birth for slaughter. 

Luke's entire life was essentially devoted to being a few moments of pleasure for his sister. 

 Overall great story. Love the play on words as well  

Reviewer: Minidreamer Signed [Report This]
Date: August 09 2020 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 1

Has mas historias basadas en queensville por favor, es un concepto muy bueno

 

Reviewer: matrix2590117 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 08 2016 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please continue 

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 18 2016 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great story! The only thing missing is that there isn't more of it ;)

Reviewer: Jay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 17 2016 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

I loved the absolute cruelty! The dialog and descriptions were fantastic. I'd love to see another installment where a mother props her feet up on a table with her son scrunched under toes, and slowly crushes him as his sister watches! I love you stuff.

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