Reviews For Fractured
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Reviewer: Grandmaster B Signed [Report This]
Date: February 15 2018 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

Thinking the woman is Jason's little sister. Hope this gets an update someday.

Reviewer: Jim1989 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07 2016 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting intro.  I get the feeling the narrator was "cracked" for a substantial amount of time.  Really wondering what relationship this mystery woman has with him.  Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: SheerForce Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06 2016 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

This seems interesting. Please continue.

Reviewer: fuccx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06 2016 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 1

very good start. plz continue it. I hope that woman is the grown up little sister.

Author's Response: We will see next chapter, thanks for the comment as well

Reviewer: greaterthan3 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06 2016 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

I always look forward to your stories man.  You should totally just start writing vigenettes for this universe. Just a collection of different scenarios and characters.  Obviously with sexy stuff ;p

Looking forward to see how this plays out!



Author's Response: Hopefully the next couple chapters meet everyone's expectations.

Reviewer: White Wolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06 2016 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

It is such a treat to read your stories, Lancealot.  This one is shaping up very nicely and I'm eager for more.  Thanks for sharing!



Author's Response: You're welcome!

Reviewer: Hank the Boggle Champion Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06 2016 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow love this story! Keep writing more please!!!

Author's Response: It's definitely going to happen with this amount of feed back

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