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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01 2016 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 7

Great chapter. Loved the bath. Loved the doctor checking in on him. She squats and then rises to full height. Amazing.
I hope she talks to him more. Will Amy come by to visit the little Guy?
Later,
Diesel

Author's Response:

Thanks, Diesel!  Really appreciate the chapter by chapter views! Lol!  - There'll be lot's more 'details' involved in this opening session.  I won't spoil it, by revealing anything ahead of time, but, ...the next several chapters only cover a span of two days, and I try to make it as real as I possibly can, ... so, that you can easily picture what is taking place.  

Reviewer: The Shrunken Scholar Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01 2016 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 7

Billy sure seems to have accepted his new life very quickly. And Diana didn't even ask where or how her mom got a shrunken person. I guess I'll wait and see how things go from here.

Author's Response:

Maxine, the doctor, ...doesn't even know 'how', or why, Billy shrank??  In fantasy, some things are just excepted, I guess.  Diana may assume that all of this was suppose to happen, though, ...for some other reasons that haven't been revealed, as of yet...

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