[Report This]Date: October 12 2016 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 16
First off, great responses to my review. You answered all my questions and it was mostly becuase I didn't pay attention to those minor details.
Back to this chapter.
Maggie seems to be planning something. I just don't know what. She keeps looking at him, perhaps thinking of naughty things to do to him.
That dance scene was weird to me, but I bet other reviewers can say that this was some sort of transformation, or in the moment feeling. It was a moment where he didn't care about his worries and just enjoyed the little situation that was going on.
Hmm. I wonder what these girls have planned for Billy. Are they old enough to know any dirty thoughts? Any fantasies? I know the adult women are experienced with this so I won't be surprised if the girls don't think about it.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
They've got some tricks up their, ...well, they don't have any sleeves, soooo... maybe somewhere else? ;`)