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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2016 8:05 PM Title: 'Reflections'

Loved it, especially that last paragraph about keeping him down there for a while.

That pool party scene felt like it was out of place. I was tempted to skip it since the Amy part was awesome.

I hope Amy keeps Billy in there for a long time. Would be cool to see Jasmine ask where is Billy and Amy either lies or says something clever like "he is tucked away" "he is kept safe" "he is where he belongs" or soemthing that Jasmine won't think of anything naughty.

Amy could cross her legs as she does her daily activities too. After all, it is her fantasy. She could make it last forever.

I'm so jealous of Billy. I would love to be in his position. I wouldn't mind being tied up down there too. Sounds like fun.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Brace yourself for the next one, Tom!  ;`)

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