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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05 2017 1:25 PM Title: 'Air Tight - continued"

Love the way she rules over him. He is like a pet when she washes him. Love when she laughs at his plight and how silly and helpless he is.
Fantastic descriptive writing.

Author's Response:

Thank's D!  ;`)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2017 6:43 PM Title: 'Air Tight - continued"

Even though the chapter was continuing the air tight sequence, it felt more like it could have been a bubble bath chapter.

By reading the chapter end notes, it seems like you have next chapter all planned out. :)

I hope Amy ties Billy up again. I can feel his helplessness and being tied up to her most intimate area makes it so much better.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I usually don't like to give out any spoilers, but ...Billy's going back in...  Only, in a different position this time! ;)

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