Very interesting. Love his fear. He should be scared. Love how everything stops when Maxine enters the room. I am very much loving this story. I enjoy the different fates of each guy. And to know that there are more little men is fabulous.

Oh yeah, I love the ending! Very interesting and what a cliffhanger!

Denny's situation is interesting. He is beginning to embrace his situation. He feels safe and begins to accept his fate that it probably was for the best. I kinda agree with him. If being shrunken was a thing, I would gladly be played with a sexy giantes.

However, I want Tom to resist Amy, and not accept it like Dennis. I liked how Billy was afraid of Amy and I imagine Tom to be similar. Then Amy could force Tom to do things that she likes.

I love how Maxine was teasing James. Just imagine Mxine teasing Tom about what Amy is like. "Amy will tie you up and keep you inside her for days. She will never let you out of your sight. Tom, if you thought I was bad, let me tell you of a story of a friend of mine called Billy. Oh, Amy. That woman changed his life forever. She used him in ways that you never could dream of." Tom was shocked. "Maxine, what could be worse than being dropped down your pantyhose to your ass?" Maxine smirked. "Lets just say that Amy is a very horny woman and enjoys having.... a living dildo." Tom's eyes lit up. "Oh, also, you could move in my pantyhose. Imagine being all wrapped up, trapped in her pussy for hours. Or tied to her panties as she rubs you constantly with her fingers. Billy told me Amy likes to keep things air tight. You can only smell her as she gags you mouth shut. You won't move as she compresses you down into her pants. Your limbs stretched one by one over her vagina until it begins to slurp you up."

Tom had mixed thoughts about Amy. Sure, she was hot, but is it worth it? Is Maxine telling the truth or just scaring him. Nah, Maxine is just messing with him. Maxine continues. "You wake up with her, probably inside her. She takes you out and uses her you as her soap as she cleans her whole body, including her holes. ALL her holes," Maxine smirked. "Amy will dip you into her breakfast and suck it off you until you beg for no more. You try to eat some of what's left but she prevents you. Amy provides you with a meal with her own orgasm as it splatters your body. You lick as much as you can, worried about being hungry. She sees you have gained your full and decides to tuck you in for the day. She drops you in her panties, savoring the bump you create. Amy presses your face into her clit and lets her panties hold you in place. She goes to work and the heat builds up within her clothes. You struggle and try to escape. Amy notices this and pulls over which now scares Tom. Amy fishes out Tom before he tried anything and takes a rubber band and wraps Tom with it and Amy drops him back in her panties all tied up. Amy arrives at her office and has been working for several hours. Eventually, you might get the rubber bands loose. Amy feels you trying to crawl your way out. Amy crosses her legs, silencing the movement. She loves the feeling of you stuck between her legs and she gets wet and goes to the ladies room. As she reaches down to pick up Tom, he jumps and lands on the floor, only for Amy to pick him back up. Amy seductively threatens Tom and she takes him to her office and closes her door and locks it. She takes some tape and wraps Tom around it, multiple times, only everything above his mouth is free. Tom tried to call out for help but nothing is heard. Amy giggles, as Tom squirms in her hand. She then tells you that this punishment is for trying to escape multiple times. She takes your encased little body and inserts you headfirst inside her pussy. He vagina is sucking you in further with no intention of letting you out. Amy pushes you body way up inside her by pressing the tips of her fingers on you feet and her pussy lips close around you, sealing him inside. Amy rams you inside until you cannot tell which way is the exit. Amy retracts her finger, leaving you to struggle within her. She enjoys the feeling of keeping you there and continues her office work for the rest of the day. When Amy gets home, she pulls you out and you gasp for air. Once Amy sees the you are alive, she thrusts you back inside and tells you good night." Maxine looked at Tom and he seemed hypnotized. "That's right Tom, you are going to be given to Amy, and I think she will never let you go. Perhaps, we should says since I think Amy would like to keep you forever."

I'm so excited! I really, really, really, can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

  H'm, sounds like a cross between ThomThumb and Daugernaut, with just a little bit of Tinyone234 thrown in just to mix it all up, ...Haha, No seriously though, the rubber bands was ThomThumb's idea though, right?

What a chapter. From his ride in a purse to her picking him up. The perspective from his point of view is great. The fear of grabbing on to just her finger for support. Fantastic. Who knew the dew would be so hard to drink. Love his covering his private parts. Embarrassed in front of a Goddess. Little people and boys do that.
Describing a lot of it by his viewpoint is fun. Angela is going to also be fun.

Author's Response:

Thank's Dee!  We're slowly working toward Jeffery's part, so just keep it cool, ...I'm getting there. 

Poor Billy Little. So he's afraid of women and he doesn't like being in a small cage. Boy, did he pick the wrong fears or what. I envy him though. Being small would be very interesting if the right person gets you. If it's the wrong person, well.

Author's Response:

Thank's Dee!

Very nice chapter!

Same as in previous chapters I like the level of detail. E.g. when you described how Angela slid to the edge of her seat and her thighs spread apart :-) Or the whole scene how Angela got Dennis into her palms. I also like very much you describe smells.

The best part was how Angela loved to tease Dennis to make him blushing and embarrassed. She simply enjoyed "torturing" him :-) And he could do nothing about that. Or more precisely his personality (good man, but weak and maybe a bit shy?) prevented him to do something. So Angela's natural dominance started to smell Dennis is the right man for her :-)

So now Angela finally got Dennis. He is shrunk and helpless in her power which gives her endless possibilities to dominate him :-)

I am really really looking forward how this continues. How she will become more and more demanding and poor Dennis will be more and more like her slave :-)

I love how fast the pace is with this chapter. Maxine brings Licpet to Angela, Licpet tells the story, Angela tells her side of the story, Angela takes Licpet home and is about to celebrate. Lots of things happened and that's what made this a great chapter. A great balance of dialogue and action.

Also some great narration. The line about Maxine holding him up like a human sacrifice: perfect! He knows his life is over so it is quite a great analogy.

After hearing about the backstory, I feel bad for Dennis. He was being faithful and his wife was trying to set him up for a divorce. That's a great test to put on a spouse to see if they are committed to the marriage but once they have proven it, then they should stay married. Stacy should have asked Dennis to spice it up, but instead she just gave up.

I love that part when Angela was thinking about having Stacy react to a shrunken Dennis. Just imagine Angela putting Dennis in her cleavage and she hugs Stacy and the two of them are squeezing Dennis and his ex-wife has no idea.

So there is a part 3 to this? Then after this is diesel's chapter, or will Tom get a chapter in between or soemthing? I know Amy is really anxious for her little man coming home. So am I.

Well, I can't wait for the next chapter no matter what happens in it. I just hope the next one after Friday's update is soon too.

Author's Response:

I'm just letting my imagination take over, ...can't say how long it will be right now.  After I get to a certain point then I might start to see the direction, but that's a little way down the road...

Another alternative could be if Suzie is Maxine's sister.

But in case the giantess does not have to name Suzie (if it is ok for Diesel) then other alternative would be that Jeff would belong to Melanie - I smell she has an interesting personality too.

Alright. So we got a chapter for Diesel coming up. Let's see. He wants to be called Jeffrey and his prefered giantess is to be called Suzie. She is a little over 40 and loves to wear high heels, especially pumps. (Black is her favorite color.)

We could have Jeffrey be in one of the cages and Maxine accidently bumps that cage on the floor and it creates a small opening for Jeffery to escape. Suzie meanwhile is taking her daughter to Maxine's office for some medical stuff and Jeffrey wants to get her attention. He approaches her black pumps and hits them as hard as he can trying to get her attention. She sees him and keeps him.

We could have him be initially with a lawyer, but from what I remember, this lawyers kept this tinies in check and I don't see them losing them. Unless, maybe one of them trips and that necklace holding a tiny Jeffrey will fall out of her cleavage and break, freeing Jeffrey. He is currently in a parking lot where the lawyer trips, and she can't find him becuase he blends in with the pavement. Jeffrey runs to hide and once the coast is clear he ventures out. Then, out of nowhere, this high heel steps right in front of Jeffrey causing him to jump and that jump is noticeable to the woman who happens to be Suzie.

Maybe Maxine wants to play with Tom, but she accidently takes Jeffrey. Jeffrey is very obedient, calling Maxine ma'am very often and this brings a smile to her face. Maxine decides to reward one of her coworkers with such a reliable tiny man and she gives him to Suzie as a gift for her to keep.

Perhaps Suzie is working at the company and is suspicious of Maxine lately. She follows Maxine to the room full of cages and when Maxine is gone, Suzie sneaks in and she looks into a cage and sees a guy named Jeffrey. He looks cute to her, but Jeffrey is scared of her. Suzie is fascinated and takes him out of the cage and holds him. Jeffrey is mentally shifting his pants and Suzie savors the moment. Suzie decides to keep Jeffrey as leverage to blackmail Maxine, but later she finds other uses of Jeffrey and decides to keep him a secret.

These are a few examples that I came up with based off the guidelines from Diesels reviews.

Author's Response:

Hey, Tom!  Appreciate the input a bunch!

Escaping works but it's up to you buddy. Don't ruin your story for me. But if you can do a chapter, it's great. But I am fine either way.

Author's Response:

Thank's Diesel, I appreciate that.  And, all of your reviews, too.  I felt that it was the least I could do, showing you some respect, as well.  So, by creating a little something within the tale to reflect a little of what your own personality has added to it. Sometimes, even a single statement - or a 'one liner' comment, can have an effect on the direction of a scene.  Sooo, with that said, ...look for Suzie to appear somewhere around chapter 55 or 56. ;`)

The way how you incorporated Deny into the story was simply perfect!

Your writing style is so realistic that I became Deny while reading it. I could feel that dark place with thick air and lavender aroma. Staying and holding the bars. Then seeing Maxine's huge face and her bright red nails. And then a feeling how metal bars are slipping out of my hands when she is picking me up.

I liked how she told him she knows exactly what he needs now ... that he is going to be so useful now :-)Yes, feeling useful definitely helps against ruined life and depressions ... and Angela will certainly make him very useful soon ;-) - what a nice cruel humor of Maxine.

But the most superb part of this chapter was when you revealed circumstances how Deny and Angela know each other. It was a powerful psychological moment that Angela is the best friend of Deny's ex wife.

So reading that I could feel that pang. Is Maxine really going to give me to lustful Angela Cooper? The best friend of my ex? I really got a lump in my throat and I felt shivering in my chest - that was that so known mental arousal from upcoming submission.

I am really curios how this continues. How Angela reacts. Maybe she will not resist and little bit tease Deny in front of Maxine ;-) (like she did before but this time she will get the desired attention)

Your stories have great level of detail! Accompanied with nice psychological moments. I enjoy them so much!