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Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2017 9:01 AM Title: 51 'Mr. Yum Yum'

I love domestic femdom scenes very much. So I liked how Angela was thinking about using the little man. And how she felt empowered and aroused.


But the most erotic scene was when Angela got amused seeing Tom wiping his hands into her pants. You wrote:

"Tilting her head to the side, trying to contain her laughter. Just a slight jiggle slipped out as she covered her mouth, her belly shook and her breasts bounced as she attempted to control herself from bursting into a fit of girlish giggling..."

That was just perfect. Very nice psychological moment showing Angela is sincerely amused by the effect of her dominant behavior - which is so erotic!

I liked activities Angela was thinking about for her little man. Just for further inspiration here are some others I can imagine:

• collecting crumbs from the carpet

• collecting crumbs from Angela's clothes while she is eating and relaxing in front of TV. (He is not allowed to eat them (that would be stealing) but only putting them back into her plate).

• collecting toe nails after pedicure

• cleaning Angela's toothbrush

• removing hairs from Angela's hairbrush

• cleaning the toilet brush

• shampooing Angela's curly pubic hairs (I would love if she is not shaved.)

 

... rewards when he is a good boy:

• Angela rubs nutella chocolate on her anus and he licks it clean.

• Angela sits him straddling on her leg and let him hump her pantyhose thigh. She may let him hump also her ankle or crotch. He is never allowed to cum without her permission. 

• He may sniff her anus, crotch, feet, soiled pantyhose, ...

• Angela gives him these rewards in front of her friend (e.g. that one she watches the porn with)

 

... punishments for infractions:

• taking away the privilege to use hands or to speak

• corner time

• caning with a ruler

• flogging with stinging nettles

• taping him to the inner side of the toilet lid and then ignoring when she uses the toilet

• wrapping him in a lace except the head (like a mummy) and securely hanging him into the front part of the toilet bowl so that he is in the water up to shoulders. Then she uses the toilet as if he is not there. 

Angela would use punishments to reaffirm her authority. So after each punishment they do a small ritual which gives him a way to affirm his submissive role. E.g. she stays above him hands on her hips. He drops on hes knees and kisses her feet. She then squats and allow him to kiss her anus. If she feels horny after punishing him she then takes him and uses him as her living dildo.

His name could be e.g. Deny (like orgasm denial which is my favorite fetish too) :-)

 



Author's Response:

   Ew yeah, I really like the idea of   "shampoo-ing"  of her curly-bush, or even just sitting there in it, while she watches u-tube vid's, or casually sits at her vanity brushing her hair...  ;`)

 The Nutella on the rim sound pretty kinky!  Lol!  Maybe some whip-cream, too! (From the squirt can) Oh, Yeah, humping that panty-hosed ankle, as she casually sits crossed leggged - bouncing her foot, flipping her toe!

  *The puishments i.e. 'Stinging Nettles'  "Yowch!"  I once grabbed a handfull of those when I was pulling weeds! Son-of-a-Bitch! Them are some wicked weeds!  My hands were raw for the rest of the day! 

  ...I like Deny.  Denial and tease, slow torture and humiliation.  Foot and Ass worship, ...severe punishment in order to mentally control him - almost to the point of mentally breaking him - almost !!!  Got It!

 

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06 2017 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 1

How about Jeffrey? Maybe a Giantess named Suzie. It can be later in the story if it fits better.
Thanks,
Diesel

Author's Response:

Got it.  Should be in the next chapter, ...or the one after.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2017 11:59 PM Title: 51 'Mr. Yum Yum'

Yes! I love this transition!

After all these chapters of flirting with the idea of Angela with Tom, we finally get the news that Amy's sex session with Tom is more important.

Wow, seems like everyone likes Tom. Cheeky little bastard, isn't he. Even Angela couldn't resist him. Well, Amy claimed him first so I'm excited for that.

When I read that Amy sent an email that said urgent, I was thinking it was just about her desire for Tom. I still love her anticipation for him.

I think my fan fiction chapter that I made recently would fit in nicely into the next chapter. I know you have a plan all ready for it, but maybe my ideas from it can inspire you once again. :)

Interesting to listen how Maxine doesn't care much for the tiny guys she shrank and always thinks that they are the same. Also, she considers them very insignificant which makes her unaware of how each one is unique. I'm glad Amy's email reminded Maxine how special each tiny is.

I love the seductive, yet sinister Maxine at the end of the chapter. Gave me a little reminder that she was the first badass giantess that I fell in love with before the lovely Amy took over.

Speaking of Amy, we know she changed her bedroom into a sex dungeon and has a full inventory of ideas to play with Tom.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

  Well, okay, Tom.  You got your wish, but when Amy gets ahold of you, ...you'll probably wish that Maxine had never received that e-mail from her!  She really had to restrain herself with Billy, because - well, she felt so sorry for him under the circumstances, and all, ...but with Mr. Speedman, that's a different story!  I think the chapter title will be something over-the-top, -  'Cringeworthy'   Should be up by Friday or Saturday.  Thank's Man!  ;`)

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2017 10:42 PM Title: 51 'Mr. Yum Yum'

I am definitely keeping hope alive. Love this story sooo much. Tom is in big trouble. I can hardly wait for the fear they will have in the hamster cages when Maxine enters the room. What will she do with the cat?
Excellent,
Diesel

Author's Response:

  Thank's Dee!  If you want to be included in the story too, just let me know!  And,  I'll toss you into the next upcoming chapter - along with Licktoy.   Just tell what you want your name to be, ...or, I can come up with one - if you want me to, but - don't complain about it if you don't like it, ... hee hee   I'll think up something for you unless you have one that you want me to use for you.  If not, that's cool too.  Just glad that you're enjoying the story!

 

 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2017 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

@licktoy,

Yep! I absolutley cannot wait to get back to Amy. She oozes sexiness in my eyes. The way she dominated Billy and played with him for days just made me so jealous of him. I wanted to take Billy's place from the moment she laid her hands on him.

Unfortunately, since shrinking is currently fantasy, I feel that this Tom character is the closest I can get and I will experience the fun of Amy through him.

I like that idea about Maxine wrapping Tom in lace except the head like a mummy. It's another form of bondage that I love. Maxine should wrap Tom up as a gift for Amy.

Angela is not that bad, it's just that Amy has been put on this pedestal up for me and unfortunately any other woman just doesn't seem right except Amy.

Yeah, I hope Maxine does say soemthing like that:
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"Hmm. I see that you like Tom. He is just one of many men designed for women like you and me.
In fact, after what I have seen so far, I think I have found the perfect little man, just for you."

Tom looked up at Maxine with a sigh of relief. 'I guess I'm not going home with Angela.'

Maxine grabbed Tom and went back to her office. She took another man from a cell. He looked handsome and had a decent build on him. Tom could tell he had some competition. In fact, he got jealous a bit. 'If this new guy is going to Amy, I would be pissed'.

Maxine took the new guy and Tom back to the room where Angela awaits. She placed on her thigh while she brought the other man out for Angela to see.

"This man, I haven't named him yet, has quite a lot of energy and got a nice body. Not to mention that he has fancied women just like you. As a bonus," Maxine whispered, "he has a great tongue".

Angela felt herself getting wet. Not only was she getting to see one tiny man, but another one and this one looking at her like a goddess. Maxine described him perfectly, her mind racing at possibilities at what to do with him. 'Where should I put him?' Angela asks herself. 'He has a great tongue, no, should I? Oh my, this is naughty of me,' she thought.

"Angela" Maxine called out, interrupting her dream. "How does this mean seem to you? Would you like to hold him?"

"Oh yes"

Maxine lets the man walk onto Angela's hand. He does so with grace, he kneels down in respect.

"What a gentlemen", Angela compliments.

The little man began licking her hand, worshipping her. Angela could feel it. She could feel his little tongue run up and down her palm. It was so small, yet she could feel it. She closed her eyes. Angela began imagining that tongue on other places of her body.

"I take it you like him better than Tom". Maxine asked, winking at Tom. He glared back up at her in annoyance.

Angela, still entranced by the tiny man serving her, decided to want this man more than anything right now.

"Maxine, I would love to keep this man. Not like a few days that I asked with Tom. I was thinking a bit longer."

"You mean, forever?" Maxine smiled. "Of course, he is yours. Do with him as you please."

Angela didn't say anything. She just beamed a smile and looked down at the tiny man at her hand. There was soemthing special about him.

"I'm going to call you licktoy. How would you like to be my very own personal licking toy?" Angela asked.

Angela knew she didn't have to ask this man's persmisison, but she felt a bit of compassion toward the little fella and wanted to make him comfortable. She knew he would please him. However, she wanted to be fair also.

The man looked up and nodded. Immediately he went back to licking her palm, almost done, as he was nearing her wrist.

"Oh thank you Dr. Maxine!"

"It was a pleasure to have you. I hope this man....um licktoy will provide even more pleasure."

Angela looked down at the tiny man. She now has her own licktoy. Hopefully, he will be the answer to all her problems.

"You're going in my cleavage for now. I am going to have fun with you tonight." Angela said as she slid Licktoy between her round boobs. Licktoy's head stuck out and he began licking his surroundings. "Uh, uh. A little licktoy." She took a finger and pressed down on his little head and slowly he slipped down her cleave until he wasn't visible. She could afford having him spotted on the way home.

By the time Angela reached her car, Licktoy has created quite the slippery environment from the effort he was licking her. Combined with the heat of the sun, she was getting turned on.

Licktoy, felt his body loosen up as the slippery cleavage wasn't able to hold him any longer. He slipped straight down and Angela felt his body slide down her belly toward her legs.

"Going somewhere?" Angela smiled as she saw Licktoy rest on her body.

"Well, you were heading in the right direction because I have a this problem and now is a great time for your help. Who knows licktoy, maybe you will enjoy it." She smiles.

Angela held Licktoy above the waist band of her panties and her other hand pried it open. Licktoy's mouth began salivating at what lies below him.

Angela released her hand and licktoy fell down, and slid right into her groove. She let her waistband snap back and licktoy was pressed firmly into her. He began licking and Angela thought she was about to tremble.

She got into her car before others could see and her seated position made licktoy in a favorable position. Angela turned on the ignition and the car's vibration just added to her sensations she was feeling. This little man was going to changer her life.

Meanwhile, as Angela left her office, Maxine looked down at Thomas Speedman. He looked upset.

"What's wrong sweetie?" She asked.

"I thought I would be with Amy by now, but right now I'm watching this licktoy get taken by a woman he loves and it makes me mad."

"Aw, you are jealous of licktoy!" Maxine exclaimed.

"No, I'm not!" Tom shouted back. "That little guy liked Angela. I didn't. You said I would be taken to Amy by now and I'm still here. What's taking so long?"

"You see Tom. My boss, well, the man who runs my operation of where I distribute the tinies, well, he doesn't want to give you away yet. He wanted to complete Angela's part first. Then it might be your part next." Maxine explained.

"Might be?!?" Tom fired back. "Who is this boss of yours? What's his name? I would love to find him and when I do....I "

"You will what?" Maxine teased.

"I...I will do laps on his face while he sleeps! Yeah, that's what I'm going to do. So tell me his name and take me to him." Tom countered.

Maxine sighed. "Well, Mr. midnightwriter wouldn't be pleased by this."

"Midnightwriter?! That's his name?" Tom burst out laughing. "Hahahahahaahhahaahahahaahah"

Maxine wanted to have the last laugh. "Mr. Speedman, you name suits you for a man who cums faster than a teenage boy."

Tom stopped laughing. "Alright fine. Enough of this abuse."

"Abuse?!" Now Maxine started laughing. "I will show you abuse."

Maxine wrapped Tom with a lace string until only his head was free. Tied up as he was, there is no escape. She took his bound body, lowered it toward hips and watched Tom struggle. Maxine wasn't going to just let Tom sit in her panties. She wanted to feel him. She thrust his body inside her headfirst and she pushed on his feet as far as she could. Maxine pulled up her panties and pantyhose and patted her crotch.

"Tom, if you really want to be with Amy, expect this kind of abuse daily. I know she will love to have you."

Author's Response:

  Holy Crap!  I guess we better get Tiny Thomas over to Amy's place, and fast!  I wouldn't want to be held responsible for his outrage or his dangerous actions caused by the slow progression of this story.  The thought of all of those innocent victims falling to their death, ... at the hands of some crazed fetishist with a high-powered rifle hidden atop the roof of a building somewhere above downtown Manhatten!

  Heh,  whoever said, Tom wasn't modest, ...Now That was the longest review 'EVER!'   ;`) 

Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2017 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

@Tom: It seems you cannot wait to go to Amy :-) And yes it would be very nice if there is a little submissive man owned by a demanding dominant woman who would call him my licking toy ;-)

Maxine has several cages with little men on the shelf. These men are probably her patients so she knows a lot of details and secretes about them.

So she could answer Angela something like:

"Of course Angela, I knew you would like it and it will be beneficial for your therapy too. But I have another little one which will better fit your needs - specially for you."

... and while talking with Angela she can nonchalantly take Tom, puts his hands down and bind a lace all around his body except the head. Angela could find the whole scene very arousing ...

 



Author's Response:

Okay, LT!  You're In!  

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04 2017 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

I got an idea. Since Licktoy said that Angela needs a guy like him, maybe she should get a tiny human named licktoy. (Just ask licktoy first.)

That way, Tom will go to Amy! :)

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04 2017 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 1

This was one of my favorite chapters. Trying to imagine what it's like to be nude and kneeling on her open palm. The shame, the fear of being in front of this beautiful Giantess. Then to be in her grip. So helpless.
Loved it,
Diesel

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04 2017 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 50

50. What a chapter. Really love Maxine's psychological viewpoint. More of this, please. Little tom should have great fear. Ms. Cooper will be an excellent owner. Love how his feelings or opinion don't matter.
To think Maxine has cages of little men at home is scary. They must be insanely frightened. Will Maxine think about shrinking large masses of people?
I can hardly wait for Maxine to study her frightened little men. Their reaction to a Giantess face, voice, hand.
Ms. Cooper will have some fun with her new pet.
Loved this chapter and the psychology,
Diesel

Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 03 2017 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 50

I think Angela, a heavy-set nymphomaniac mature woman with secret fantasies to dominate men is a very interesting personality for this story!

She was abused in previous relationships and now she needs to cure her sore soul. Maxine as her therapist understands the best would be if she could experience quite opposite than before. If Angela would be in charge now. Therefore a tiny man she could easily control would be very beneficial for her therapy.

But probably not any tiny man is suitable for Angela ;-)

I think the best for her cure would be a tiny submissive man. A true submissive who would suffer humiliation and pain and unfairness he would genuinely rather not experience and who would be genuinely fearful of punishments for infractions but paradoxically deep inside he would crave to be treated like that, being controlled and helpless in the power of a dominant woman.

She would definitely need somebody like me :-)

I loved very much the whole scene how Tom was sitting naked on Maxine thigh gripping to the edge of her skirt. Helpless, humiliated but excited. That was simply excellent!

Also how Tom awoke in Maxine purse wrapped in the pair of her pantyhose was very nice.

And finally I liked Angela asked if she could have Tom for few days.

I am looking forward to see how Angela's dominant nature will flow out of her.



Author's Response:

Thank's,  LT!  "May I call you LT?"

   I had a bit of difficulty getting this one out.  I had read and re-read, this entire chapter as least a dozen times, (before posting) and It had gotten tp the point, where the scene itself, had lost all meaning; I was just reading 'meaningless words'.  It had already been nearly two weeks since my last update so I just went ahead and posted it, ...reluctantly.  I didn't know what to think about it, ...the original draft was slightly longer and I lost part of it during editing, (screwed up email account) So, I was slightly worried about how it would go over...

  After reading your review, though, I re-read the chapter, once again, and...  it actually was pretty good, wasn't it!  ;`)

  Thank's Man, You have no idea how much that helped!!!

 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02 2017 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

Ah ok. That makes sense. I see where you are coming from. Good point about having Angela changing her thoughts on Tom. This is classic character development and I was blind to see it!

I will say that I'm still not entirely sure I like Tom being with Angela, but maybe Maxine can work something out like give Angela another tiny and she was just using Tom to test the waters.

Maxine didn't says yes to Angela for her to keep Tom, so I have this feeling that Maxine will instead propose another guy instead.

I'm also assuming that once Angela's turn is done, then Maxine is off to see Amy? (Fingers crossed).

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02 2017 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

Ok, this time I'm going to calm down a bit.

First, I should have realized you put a tbc in the end notes last chapter. I guess I forgot about it after all this time since the last chapter.

Second, I love the detail you put into this scene. Most authors can't relive an entire scene again becuase they feel that they have run out of ideas. However, you used Tom's perspective to keep it a bit interesting. (Still felt repetitive though.)

Lastly, I know you have a plan with the next few chapters, so even if I don't like it, I feel like it is a setup to make me enjoy something a lot more in the later chapters.

Author's Response:

  I've been working on another project that has taken up alot of my time here lately.  I didn't really feel good about this chapter either, ...it was pretty slow going - I had a much larger chapter already written, and finished (Last week) and I somehow lost most of it in the editing process, ...then, when I started to begin again, I had to stop and go back to work on a prior arrangement, (it's hard sometimes when you have an extended contract w/ a company that wants you to be on call) got to pay the bills!  

  I wanted to do this chapter from Angela's perspective. She was terrified of the whole idea at first, and she wanted nothing to do with it, ...at all!  And, I was trying to create a situation where she was overcoming her fears. Her basic instinct to shy away from this tiny person, suddenly forced to touch him and then awakening something much more revealing... about herself. 

  Next chapter will be another slow one, as well, so get ready for more of sweet Angela!  Lol!  Although, don't be to quick to form an impression of her just yet, ...she might surprise you! 

  Thanks for the honest input, Tom.  And, don't worry I'm not offended by anything to do with the story, your suggestions mean alot, and I really look forward to getting your opinion!  

  Next chapter should be out by Thursday, Hopefully! ...if I'm not distracted again...

  Thank's Tom!  

 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2017 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 50

To be honest, this is the first time I'm not going to give a 10. It's still good, but this Angela in the office scene feels like it's been going on forever.

The first third was about Tom's memory about the prisons and how Maxine treated him. The second third was about how Tom felt on Maxine's leg and how he was trying to participate in the conversation. The third part was Maxine letting Angela hold Tom and for a second, I thought this was another memory, but instead it was present time, but basically the same thing happened with Angela trying to adjust to holding Tom.

There were a few minor things I liked for example, the way Angela sucked on Tom's head, Tom's memory of being in pantyhose. (Even though it's redundant, I love reading about it.)

Unfortunately, I also don't like where the story is going with Angela asking Maxine to keep Tom for a few days. I thought in the previous chapter or two, Angela couldn't control herself and wasnt ready for Tom, and now she wants him?

In addition, this cat is starting to annoy me. Like Tom, I feel like the attention should go to him, but then this cat shows up and is that new kid that everyone loves.

Did Maxine kill the cat, or is she just holding it? Disappearing in a hand could mean a lot.

Well, I guess with every good part of a story, there is also a bad part. Or maybe the good parts are sooo great that the other good parts just seem ok. In my opinion, this story is in one of those phases and I can only hope that I can enjoy it.

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I hope this review didn't come off as too harsh. I did t exactly have the best of days and I had the notion that Maxine was done talking to Angela and will drive to Amy's soon. Seeing this I felt......disappointed. (Like the new pirates movie.)

Well, I kinda can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31 2017 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

Just wondering how everything is going. Missing your story.
Later,
Diesel

Author's Response:

Yeah, I had a bit of the dreaded 'Wrters Block'.  Started over several times on this upcoming chapter and it's almost ready to edit.  Should be uploading it Friday, or Saturday, ...not quite finished yet.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25 2017 12:29 PM Title: 'Angela's Surprise'

Here's what I think. Fabulous. From the beginning when Tom is finding out what life in a purse is like, and throughout this chapter, he learns a lot.
Loved his fear of Maxine and her hand. To see her gigantic face looking in at you is scary. To see her hand reaching in to get you is terrifying. How do you escape her fingers reaching for you?
Maxine's dialogue, is great, Don't be afraid little one. As if that helps. She talks to him like a small child or a baby bird that she just found.
This is one of my favorite chapters. I love his fear. Fear of the unknown and fear of being small. Humongous women that don't really care about your feelings or what you want.
Also loved how just raising her voice can bring him to his knees. They are like gods or more so Goddeses to little tom.
Really loved it,
Diesel

Author's Response:

  Thank's Dee!  Yeh, I was a bit worried about that dialogue - It's not that it's so difficult, but - I really struggle to write - realistic - dialogue.  I'm constantly asking myself, "Does it sound realistic?" and I go back and change it, and then go back and change it again, and again... 

Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25 2017 8:45 AM Title: 'Angela's Surprise'

I like how the story continues. I think it was a great idea to create several tiny men and give them to various women. It opens so many possibilities :-)

I am looking forward seeing how they will be exploring their dominant site and turning their tiny males into slaves, servants and sex-toys :-)



Author's Response:

  Yes, and thank's   LickToy!  I agree. Having just two characters in a story is much easier to flesh out. However, your perspective is then extremely limited to just those two people. With several things going on all at the same time, and different personalities interacting with some unknown victims; it allows the writer to skip around and go from gentle and loving, to cruel and uncaring or --sick and demented, (Ha!)...opening up the box and allowing Pandora to stretch her wings!  

  Maybe, ...or just simply creating different scenarios within the same story.  I'm constantly thinking about and imagining these little GTS scenes, wherever I go, ...I could easily write a bunch of simple shorts, ..but, I'd much rather challenge myself and try to incorporate them all into a single tale.  

 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23 2017 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

To view the word count of each chapter:

First, you click on any chapter. Then at the top of the page, there should be a link for "table of contents". If you click that, it will show each chapter and a word count as well as how many reviews each chapter got. (I'm using mobile, so I'm not sure if it's the same on the computer.)

Author's Response:

Ah, Okay!  I never knew that!  Oh Yeah, if you can check it on your phone, I'm sure that it'll work on the PC.  Thank's Tom!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 23 2017 2:27 PM Title: 'Angela's Surprise'

This was the second longest chapter in this story. The chapter "punishment" was the longest. Also, yes. This chapter definately had the most dialogue in it.

You captured my exact thoughts as Thomas this chapter. I did not want to be a toy for Angela. After seeing her, I would love to be in Amy's hands instead.

Maxine really wanted to give Tom to Angela... but why? Especially when she promised Amy Tom instead. Any tiny person could help Angela. But only Tom could help Amy. Angela wants a little man, and Amy wants a sex toy she can fuck all day and night. I think since Tom is a crimal, he deserves to go to Amy. :)

Interesting to listen about Amy and Angela's porn interests. Angela likes femdom, and Amy loves giantess fun. Funny thing is, I enjoy watching both. Combine the two, and I instantly favorite the video. A giantess ties up a man to play with...you can't get any better than that.

For Angela, there are certain types of panties that have built in dildo's facing inward, so when you put the panties on, you also have the dildo go inside you and can relieve the stress she has.

Once again, I like the dialogue part. Now we just need a dirty dialogue chapter. Maybe not now, but when Amy thinks of her kinky ideas, I would love to hear her say this to Tom.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

  Thank's Tom,  this next chapter is in progress, it's going to continue from where this one left off. I'm not yet, ready to jump away from this scene, quite so soon.  It took alot of extra effort. (I really suck at writing dialogue)  Although, I've got a rough outline started for the following setup -- which will be with Joyce and Diana arriving back and Maxine's appartment.  

Next chapter, has some more surprise's, though,so get ready for the unexpected!!!  ;`)

*How did you know how many words are the those chapters?*

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22 2017 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 1

I am no where near tired of this story. I think it's beyond great. Yes, I enjoyed the lady lawyers. They give you another angle on things.
Later,
Diesel

Author's Response:

Yeah, that's what I thought too!  Thank's D!

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22 2017 12:03 AM Title: Unwinding at the End of the Day

Cool chapter. I never thought about all the bad parts of being small and at her mercy. Not pleasant ways to die.
Love his escaping to get air. To find that he's just in her purse. He gets the privilege of hearing the Giantesses conversation. Love how you describe their voices as God like. So loud. I would think her voice could bring you to your knees if she raised it.
Cool stuff,
Diesel

Author's Response:

Thank's D, It's hard to describe the surrounding environments -  create an atmosphere - and at the exact same time, ...carry on with the story.  Video would be soo, much, EASIER!  Ha, but - I can try!

Glad you're still enjoying!  *I'm surprised that you didn't comment on the fact that I brought those lady Lawyers back in the previous chapter? Especially, after I told you that I was just going to allow that to linger, ...after your comment/review on that, though,  it caused me to reflect and I suddenly changed my mind,  deciding to bring them back for a short scene.  Maybe, they'll be back again too. ;`)

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