[Report This]Date: January 14 2017 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 5
Well written, Coal White.
You appear to know quite a bit about horses and life in the wilds.
Please continue.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! I admit to knowing a lot about horses. The wilds, not so much. But I am an avid reader and watcher of westerns. As well as a firm believer in doing research before writing. ;)
[Report This]Date: January 14 2017 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 5
Thank you for retuning to QTSWorld to continue writing. I and presumeably many others have missed you! I really hope that you will be back for a long while, regardless of whichever name you are finding necessary to use.
In spite it the attention and care I have given it, I can find nothing out of order with your text, and for that I am quite happy. You have a great storytelling technique, and I enjoy reading your tale. Keep up the good work, and let's have lots more.
Author's Response:
I am flattered that you took the time to read and review my story. I'm working on chapter 6 right now. I do plan to stay for a while. It's slowing down just enough at work that I have some free time. This story has taken a little different turn than I originally anticipated, but that's what makes it fun! Hope you'll like the new chapter when it arrives.
Date: January 14 2017 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 5
Good story so far. I like the conflicting creation myths of the humans and giants and the apparently strained relationship between the two peoples. The giant horse and slight western influence gives this a different feel from other fantasy giantess stories. Interested to see more.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your kind and thought-out review! I appreciate the time you took to read and review.