Date: March 29 2017 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 7
She should have laid the little man on her stomach to sleep for the night, They both can feel the 2 men in her stomach. :)
Date: January 29 2017 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 7
I love these kinds of stories - the ones with extreme kindness and cruelty in equal measure.
When a giant is too kind, they come across as boring, when a giant is too cruel, they can be very off-putting.
So I love the ambiguity in this! As much as I'm here for the fetish-fuel, it's great to actually feel strong emotions of anger at Tor, and sadness for her victims.
I also read the side-story, and while it's not a happy ending, it's good to get that closure on their story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review my story! Tor is a very strong character and definitely has her off-putting moments, to say it lightly. I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Date: January 15 2017 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 7
I'm very torn about this story. Fetish-wise, I find the descriptions of the doctor and assistant struggling within her as she eats the rest of her supper to be very hot. But story-wise, I now find Tor to be an utter bitch and I have no sympathy for her. I feel sorry for Eric and the fate he's stuck with as her pet.
Author's Response:
I love that you find her to be an utter bitch. I was hoping she came across that way but wasn't sure I had accomplished that. As for fetish, go read the side story I just posted. I think you'll enjoy it immensely. ;)
[Report This]Date: January 15 2017 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 7
I love your knowledge of horses. I have only a basic knowledge and understanding, that went unused as I grew up, a long time ago. Instead, I learned about aircraft and their power plants.
Your writing style is great, and you tell the story well. I'm just waiting for more!
Author's Response:
While you wait, go have a look-see at the side-story I posted. Thanks again for your review!