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Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: February 27 2017 10:19 PM Title: IV - A Big Buddy

Poor chapter.

Not an enjoyable read.



Author's Response:

Fair criticism, but I'd really appreciate hearing how you think I could improve to make the rest of the story more enjoyable. Thanks for the hoenst feedback and look forward to hearing from you again.

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