Date: September 29 2019 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 1 - First Encounter
Please finish this story. The lesbian insertion that you seem to be leading up to is so rare for some reason. And the few that it happens in rush the whole thing but you seem to build the scenes according to the masterbation session using her sister. Please come back to this story
Date: August 09 2018 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 1 - First Encounter
would you like to add some plots ,that Audrey rampages around in a city,town or forest?
[Report This]Date: November 18 2017 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 1 - First Encounter
wow. It needs some more plot twists though. But i love the work you did thus far.
Date: May 29 2017 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 1 - First Encounter
this is a lot of fun! I love how dominant Audrey is^^ keep it up!
[Report This]Date: May 29 2017 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 1 - First Encounter
I always check this site specifically for your work. Keep up the great work! Love the updates!
Date: May 27 2017 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 1 - First Encounter
You're killin' it. Great work here man. Love Audrey's attitude now that she's big. She needs some more shorties to lord it over though. Look forward to more.
Author's Response:
That's great feedback. I thought I'd have introduced some new shorties by now, but the writing is really stretching out with the ideas I already had in place. Stay tuned!
[Report This]Date: March 22 2017 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 1 - First Encounter
Great beginning!
Can't hardly wait for this story's continuation.
Author's Response:
I'm looking forward to blending a good growth story ina lightweight, believable sci-fi setting. Can't wait to show off my ideas.