[Report This]Date: November 23 2019 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
Such an awesome story. Amazing work to take what's normally a single scene in a larger story, and make a full length work of such high quality about it. Love this!
Date: October 08 2018 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm looking in advance for Michelle swallowing them all. So delicious!
[Report This]Date: November 15 2017 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
if anyone reads this just made first story!
[Report This]Date: November 15 2017 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
hello and yes i am a giantess who is hungry! Loved your story and would like to request to make a story with you
Date: August 30 2017 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
please continue!!
[Report This]Date: July 08 2017 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hope youre not having abandoned this story... it was so damn good. Please continue!
[Report This]Date: June 23 2017 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
enjoyed this a lot so far
Date: June 20 2017 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
Honestly love this. Hoping Sarah just gives up hope. Having her watch everyone be devoured, then join them. :3
[Report This]Date: June 19 2017 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please continue, I fell in love with this, the plot, the talk, I love more nasty talk and plots. Looking forward how it continues!
[Report This]Date: June 19 2017 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
Man, you really like to dive right into the thick of it, huh? That first chapter was wonderful; the buildup leading to just enough of a false alarm to get an idea of what their fate is really gets me wishing for the next chapter. As a fan of micro sizes, more realistic mouth play/ vore, I'm really looking forward to seeing where this goes, especially if/when they enter her mouth. Don't be afraid to get detailed!
As for the setting, I love the setup of characters you've got going on here. You've got a real conflict between all three of them due to their differing relationships with Michelle, and it works really nicely; especially for your main character as the loving boyfriend.
Keep up the amazing work and I wait with baited breath for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: June 19 2017 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
damn hot. I have missed good unaware plots on here. keep it up. hope it stays unaware and it also stays the same style
[Report This]Date: June 18 2017 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
this story is already a new fav of mine, hope it wont get ruined in the next part. you have one of the best talents ive seen here, so much details and the conversations between the micros are the best of it all. youre not just going for this boring shrunk, fallen inside cereal, eaten, over plot, no you totally make it realistic. i could so much identify with the characters. please continue!
[Report This]Date: June 18 2017 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
Fantastic. The best unaware story in a while on here.
Date: June 18 2017 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
I have to say, this story is fantastic. I am very, very impressed with the amount of detail provided. It is like I could vividly imagine the situation as if I was there! That is a trait that is hard to provide in a story, but when it is done properly like you have done... dam it really makes a story be a story. All I could really say is keep up the good work. I am very excited for how this is going to end up. One question, are you planning on taking it full tour? If so, this is in for an awsome adventure!
[Report This]Date: June 18 2017 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
o_0 this was one of the BEST stories I read on this site so far, your, just wow!!! I loved this part the most:
“Do you think they’ll ever find out?”
“What would be left to find?” Linda spat back with a bit of venom.
“Maybe...maybe we’ll make it through her system alive?”
“I don’t want to think about getting shitted out by your sister, Sarah!”
“Would you rather die? Well, Linda?” Ethan joined in the argument, turning toward Linda.
“I don’t know, maybe? Between dying and spending the rest of my life remembering being trapped shit and flushed down a toilet? I don’t think I want to remember that forever, Ethan! I don’t want to be this bitch’s shit!”
“Stop calling my girlfriend a bitch!” Ethan growled, eyes narrowing on the woman in the passenger seat.
“She’s literally going to kill us and you’re defending her? How fucking whipped are you, dude?”
“None of this is her fault, Linda!” Sarah interjected, jumping to Ethan’s defense.
“She’s going to murder us, even if she doesn’t know! This cunt is committing negligent homicide!”
“I swear to god, if you say one more thing about my girlfriend, I’ll…”
“You’ll what, E? Kill me? I think the gigantic fucking woman whose breakfast we’re floating in is going to handle that part!”
I LOVE your style man!! This talk was so hot, of them haveing this conversation of going against each other, and have this talk of not wanting to became this bitchs shit. The part with floading as part of giant turd in the toilet was so hot. I hope youll continue this and it having a cruel ending, I dont like happy endings.
Love your style man!! This story rocks!