[Report This]Date: August 23 2017 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wow! What a chapter and what a story man! Bravo! So far this is turning out to be one of my ALL TIME favorites on this site. You keep up the amazing work! You have a fan in me! Ha, get that reference? Lol cheers!
Author's Response: So glad you are enjoying it. I may finish editing the next chapter this weekend or I may start chapter 10 we will see which way things go. But a chance at a early posting.
[Report This]Date: August 22 2017 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 4
God I love Pey, so deliciously bratty.
Author's Response: Queen of the brats
Date: August 22 2017 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 4
Cool chapter. Love the freedom given and taken away. Peyton is logical and controlling. I hope Averys dad shrinks. Maybe to an inch and as he looks for help she sees him and squashes him under her shoe.
Will an adult or teacher find Nancy? Maybe hate her also and put her in the class cage that use to hold hamsters?
Author's Response: I don't know about a adult teacher. I hadn't thought about that or outlined anyone in that way. Avery does go home in the current chapter I just wrote which is chapter 9 I believe. So please look forward to it.