Date: September 16 2017 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 10
Sandra is amazing!!! I hope we get to see more with her! The Ex-Wife having the wife small is such a fantastic idea (hint hint ;)
I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep it up! Cheers!
Author's Response: Good and bad news. Nothing else is planned for Sandra in this tale but you haven't seen the last of her
Date: September 14 2017 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 10
I can't help but notice the dad is getting no heat at all for this affair/divorce thing that happened. Not that I really care that much about the marriage problems of these characters. I'm just saying it takes two people to cheat. Or one person and a sufficiently intelligent robot. I mean I've seen him. He didn't seem THAT great. I mean is he like some Channing Tatum looking embodiment of kindness and generosity. The actual Jesus reborn! I've gone on a tangent......
Also come on Nancy cheer up! You're cleaning out your step monster's teeth. It's not the worst thing! For Peyton's sake sing a song or something. Make work fun! Own it! That'll really throw her off.
Hard to read Sandra. I honestly don't know who the better parent is here. I mean Nancy ls a homewrecker but I ain't really reading much from these other two. Anyway it's good to see Peyton actually loves her stepmo- I mean cares about the time she's invested in training Twerp! Yeah definitely that second one!
Author's Response: Yeah the dad is getting a free pass on purpose thus far. It's rose colored glasses on Peyton's part. You always want to believe that the ones you love could do no wrong. You wa not to give them every benefit of the doubt. Then you mix that in with believing what you want to Bielieve. As the dad is from innocent. I have wrote him gettijgnheat a few times but have edited it out so far. I'm not sure whom is the better parent either overall. Both have their faults. I'd probably lean towards Nancy but slot of mistakes were made by all parties with Peyton caught in the middle. Thanks so much for reading and commenting. Hope you continue to enjoy.