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Reviewer: NotSirk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2017 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 15

*Sigh*

Hearing stuff like Nancy losing her ability to read or do math is really what hurts most. More than officer Daniels being eviscerated by cookie crumbs. OREO cookie crumbs probably! But seriously her humanity is dying out. And being bred?! Only getting the family you wanted after literally becoming an animal. Bitter. Only silver lining (if you can even call it a silver lining. More like falling in poop and being happy you didn't swallow any) When Nancy's finally gone. Just a shallow memory in the back of Twerp's head. Twerp will be probably be happy. She'll have nothing to worry about except how to please Peyton, and maybe Peyton will actually love her for it. Her humanity is just a burden at this point.

Despite all the words above these one's I still have hope for Nancy List! She's a survivor if nothing less, Most tinies wouldn't even make it this far. I think even if Twerp wins out part of Nancy will always be around. One day years in the future Peyton will swear and then hear "Language young lady!" and it will be a nice surprise. (That probably won't happen) Still enjoying the story wherever it goes and looking forward to the end and whatever else you decide to do with these characters.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: October 07 2017 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 15

What an incredibly great chapter. I never realized the torture of being in Peyton's mouth. Being in there as she crushed a cookie and drank a coke.
Really descriptive and fun to read.
Twerps brain being reduced fascinates me. Never thought of that. Fantastic concept.
Finally Avery's idea of breeding to make more little people. Little people who would grow up only knowing what they were taught and that they were Gods.
Excellent,
Diesel

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 07 2017 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 15

Breeding? They went from high school girls to outright monsters overnight...beautiful.

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