Reviewer: kbDArt Signed [Report This]
Date: December 21 2022 8:42 PM Title: The unexpected visitor

Pretty good erotic short story; would have liked a little more back story on the relationship between Amanda and Matthew. To me, the buildup is very important to the overall effect of the story, so even though the story is well written, it needs that extra bit of oomph.

Reviewer: Shaman Signed [Report This]
Date: August 09 2017 12:51 PM Title: The unexpected visitor

Very nicely narrated, and quick to the point, but enough text to keep it interesting. Thanks for the work!