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Reviewer: mg2sio4 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 25 2018 3:08 AM Title: Introductions are in Order

Easily the best combination of attention to detail, character development, and just well-paced, well-written chapters on this site. Honestly, it's a shame written commissions are rare because you could go as pro as this niche fetish allows. Keep up the good work! 



Author's Response:

I appreciate the kind words! Unfortunately, my current writing model of 'wait until I'm catastrophically bored enough to pen a few thousand words to paper' doesn't hold up to monetization. 

Reviewer: Houseman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07 2018 8:09 AM Title: Introductions are in Order

When Becca was in paige stomach and she bent over making becca flip in her stomach was genus. But maybe a little more on detail what Paige feels would be nice.
Only thing criticism I have, perfect other wise

Author's Response:

Easy enough to change. Generally, I try to avoid time overlap between scenes but I can make it work. 

Reviewer: Houseman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07 2018 8:05 AM Title: Introductions are in Order

This story is like a really good movie that some how no one hears about when it first comes out. The one best stories ever.

Author's Response:

I have more, but only three on here at present. It is difficult to muster up the will to work continuously on the same project given the content, so I have a bunch that are all very slowly progressing.

Reviewer: Houseman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07 2018 7:58 AM Title: Introductions are in Order

I love the concept of the story, so new and brilliant. Honestly the most exciting and refreshing story on here. Have it saved and serious can not wait for more. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the kind words! I'm still writing over here. It's slow but I'm still doing it.

Reviewer: ltltb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 09 2017 8:31 PM Title: Introductions are in Order

Red freaking hot! 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Longandstrong Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 28 2017 12:45 PM Title: Introductions are in Order

Omg this is perfect!! More please, I loves this
Great work.

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot! I am to please. 

Reviewer: Yuss Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 05 2017 1:55 PM Title: Introductions are in Order

I love this story. It's fun and hot. Hope you take advantage of all the sizes Holly can have.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

I play the full range of sizes, but Holly isn't the only toy in the story.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01 2017 5:40 PM Title: Introductions are in Order

This looks like a lot of fun! Keep going.



Author's Response:

That's really nice of you to say!

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