Reviews For Kates mini series
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Reviewer: chasekampfer Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27 2018 5:19 PM Title: normal day

were all so glad that you are back



Author's Response: I been away for so long. Im battling depression and lost my email but im back.

Reviewer: giantess jessica Signed [Report This]
Date: December 27 2017 10:47 AM Title: normal day

like my outfit? https://i.pinimg.com/736x/cb/47/6d/cb476d2b03fa9e5ac6168f075dc69be6--clothes-for-women-black-clothes.jpg

Reviewer: Mr_M Signed [Report This]
Date: December 27 2017 8:29 AM Title: normal day

Sent a new ne



Author's Response: i got it

Reviewer: giantess jessica Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2017 7:47 AM Title: normal day

The reason i want to eat you is because unwilling prey like yourself feel
so good in my throat! The fighting
makes me feel alive!

Reviewer: Mr_M Signed [Report This]
Date: December 27 2017 7:42 AM Title: normal day

Ok, sent you an email from misterman505@yahoo.com



Author's Response: resend it! It didnt go through.

Reviewer: Mr_M Signed [Report This]
Date: December 27 2017 2:45 AM Title: normal day

Yikes. Well, don't take it as an offence if I start avoiding you during meal times...



Author's Response: unwilling. Mmmmmm the tastiest type!

Reviewer: Mr_M Signed [Report This]
Date: December 26 2017 5:22 PM Title: normal day

Shrink solution? Er... Who do you plan on using that on?



Author's Response: when i get bored i will use it on poeple or when i get hungry.

Reviewer: TheShadow Signed [Report This]
Date: December 26 2017 5:02 PM Title: normal day

I'm looking forward to more chapters. This is quite a feat, to enter this from a smart phone. I have trouble just selecting things from YouTube.

Good work.



Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: TheShadow Signed [Report This]
Date: December 26 2017 5:00 PM Title: normal day

This  story is very good, Jessica. You have come a long way. Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: Leylagts Signed [Report This]
Date: December 26 2017 11:46 AM Title: normal day

Wanna rp? My kik is maggiegt

Author's Response: i would love to role play.

Reviewer: Mr_M Signed [Report This]
Date: December 25 2017 6:29 PM Title: normal day

If your actual last name is Brooks, that's one thing. But actually naming your daughter Katelyn is a little too on the nose. But it's your story and honestly, I've seen far crazier things than writing fetish material about your own daughter. Still though, you are improving with each chapter you add, Which is very good and shows you are learning and willing to experiment. I've seen people go years without an inch of improvement so I hope you continue to evolve as a writer.



Author's Response: i will countiune to improve. I know it seems weird but the story is amazing.

Reviewer: Dankmeme Signed [Report This]
Date: December 25 2017 7:14 AM Title: normal day

A scene where ant sized people fall into a bowl of sticky warm honeyed oatmeal. Katelyn is unaware and continues to eat the oatmeal while the mants get scooped up and swallowed alive. Endo scene in her stomach would be good :)

Reviewer: giantess jessica Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 24 2017 6:51 PM Title: normal day

i said I was wrong when i said i lost it. I was having a mood swing when i said that. Its not born yet but this is after she was in the story. And the pic was for the discripition of what she looks like. Its the closest pic i got. You dont even know my last name!

Reviewer: Mr_M Signed [Report This]
Date: December 24 2017 6:38 PM Title: normal day

Not to be a spoil sport but... You based it on your unborn daughter you said you lost, but showed a picture of Megan fox, but then blatantly named her Katelyn Brooks? I'm really confused...



Author's Response:

Reviewer: giantess jessica Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 24 2017 3:23 PM Title: normal day

This story is based on my daughter. Im pregeant with her.

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