Date: December 26 2017 11:46 AM Title: normal day
Wanna rp? My kik is maggiegt
Author's Response: i would love to role play.
[Report This]Date: December 26 2017 11:00 AM Title: next to get eaten.
i have real shrink solution! https://doesitreallywork.org/wp-content/uploads/2015/11/shrink-solution.png
Date: December 25 2017 6:29 PM Title: normal day
If your actual last name is Brooks, that's one thing. But actually naming your daughter Katelyn is a little too on the nose. But it's your story and honestly, I've seen far crazier things than writing fetish material about your own daughter. Still though, you are improving with each chapter you add, Which is very good and shows you are learning and willing to experiment. I've seen people go years without an inch of improvement so I hope you continue to evolve as a writer.
Author's Response: i will countiune to improve. I know it seems weird but the story is amazing.
Date: December 25 2017 7:14 AM Title: normal day
A scene where ant sized people fall into a bowl of sticky warm honeyed oatmeal. Katelyn is unaware and continues to eat the oatmeal while the mants get scooped up and swallowed alive. Endo scene in her stomach would be good :)
[Report This]Date: December 24 2017 6:51 PM Title: normal day
i said I was wrong when i said i lost it. I was having a mood swing when i said that. Its not born yet but this is after she was in the story. And the pic was for the discripition of what she looks like. Its the closest pic i got. You dont even know my last name!
Date: December 24 2017 6:38 PM Title: normal day
Not to be a spoil sport but... You based it on your unborn daughter you said you lost, but showed a picture of Megan fox, but then blatantly named her Katelyn Brooks? I'm really confused...
Author's Response:
[Report This]Date: December 24 2017 3:23 PM Title: normal day
This story is based on my daughter. Im pregeant with her.