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Reviewer: moarben Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 06 2018 7:29 PM Title: In a tight spot

Great job so far. If you end this story I would love to see more of the black bbw you wrote about earlier that found the woman. A storyline of how she ran into her first and about all the guys and girls she could have had on her body during work. Even play with them attached to other toys, or leaving them in her panties as she pulled them up right after fun with another man, not even taking time to clean up as her victim is stuck down there in the mess overnight. To make it an interesting situation would be if a skinny younger white girl that her black boyfriend or husband is cheating on her with was the one shrunk and her significant other was taking care of her because he had feelings for her. Unaware to the black bbw the white girl somehow ends up in those panties after they made love. With him seeing it happen and unable to tell her as that would reveal he had been cheating. In the end she ends up being swallowed by the same juices she had just been swallowing earlier in combination with the black bbw’s. Whether she dies or lives while being plastered and caked to the crotch of those panties is up to you. I am interested to see if it goes further from there.

Sorry if that was a lot, really enjoyed your story so far.

Reviewer: chasekampfer Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2018 12:58 PM Title: In a tight spot

no no no no no no no keep writing but if you stop with story then write another



Author's Response:

Don't worry I plan to write another one after I finish this one.😊

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