[Report This]Date: July 28 2019 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Meeting at the Bar
I really like where this story is headed! Keep it up!
By the way, I sent you a PM, or... email? Not really sure how it works on this site, but I'd like to get in contact if possible!
Date: October 26 2018 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Meeting at the Bar
Really excellent description, but is there any way Ashley could take a pause to enjoy her new size before her growth continues?
[Report This]Date: August 05 2018 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Meeting at the Bar
Amazing skill to write to the point of climax and keep it interesting beyond. I don't write many sex scenes, but I'd like to improve for when I do. I made note of this story as an example of how to do it right. If you have any words of wisdom, feel free to share, since you've clearly mastered the technique!
Author's Response:
Hey thanks! A couple of quick thoughts about my technique... I take my time writing these sex sequences and they move pretty slowly. I include a lot of growing woman fan service since that is my favorite GTS genre to read. I think a lot about perspective, and try to give the scene a sense of theater. Sometimes I find that the plot objects that I want to reach aren't always consistent with how they scene is flowing once I start writing. Or sometimes they occur out of my originally intended sequence. I think it's good to work with that sometimes and see where it goes.
Date: May 21 2018 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Meeting at the Bar
Dude I always think you’re all done then you pop back out of the blue! Glad to see you’re still active. This definitely feels like a change of pace from your last two stories. It’s good stuff so far!
You all done with Audrey?
Author's Response:
Thanks!
I sincerely hope to finish Audrey before too long. I'm really conflicted about how to end that story, keeping in mind that a lot of the ideas I'm currently excited for are best used in new stories. I think the quickest way to work on her tale is to start a few new stories, and work out my writer's cramps there. Thanks for asking, as I never know what the community wants until they ask.