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Reviewer: brokenone Signed [Report This]
Date: October 12 2019 3:11 PM Title: Halfling's journey (part 2)

 i like your work. (my english isn t  much good. if is not, and i m not to good to say compliments).

but it feels somenting heavy at some place.

I not sure.

i do really like to see how a god, a king or someone powerfull finish under of feet of someone who is not.

you have a great talent, specialy for short stories.

 

 

 

Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 18 2018 11:25 AM Title: The girl who played with fairies

Wow, I don't know how I missed this chapter when it came out. Is great! The idea of being shrinking to a small size to a being already small like a fairy is awesome. I'm especially pleased with this because I like F/f more. And the domination of the fairies through the whole ordeal was very nice, especially like how Juniper placed her feet in front of Abigail's eyes when the potion was thrown in her mouth!

And well, I'm more of a fan of a personal approach rather than group domination but still enjoyed a lot this chapter!



Author's Response:

Honestly that is probably my favourite out of the stories I've written so far, I hope I can write another that comes close to it. I like writing f/f and I intend for some of the future stories in this volume to be f/f as well, just to provide more variety if nothing else. I haven't seen loads of content where the giantess in question is quite small herself, so I thought it would be a good idea to explore and I'm glad it paid off.

Glad you liked it so much!

Reviewer: footboy28 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 17 2018 4:31 PM Title: Halfling's journey (part 2)

Great chapter as always!!! Loved the trio of orcs torture.



Author's Response:

Thanks! Sorry I didn't respond to you asking for an update, a response seemed a tad unnecessary since I just uploaded another chapter haha! As always, I am happy to see that you enjoyed it :)

Reviewer: Sg20855 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 16 2018 11:05 PM Title: The girl who played with fairies

Hey there duck12345, thank you for the reply to my review. Yeah, after seeing how much your writing has improved I thought I'd go in depth with my review, and likewise, I know the more specific and in depth the review and feedback, the better it is for the writer. 

Regarding the delay and slowing down of updates, that's perfectly fine, so far you've delivered consistent quality, and it's like another reviewer said, it's about quality over quantity. 

That tease about an upcoming orc story has me greatly excited, especially the parts with having the tiny have an uncomfortable attraction towards the orcs stinky feet and the possibility of there being sisters of the orc added to the mix as well. It'll be nice to see a tiny actively lust after their giantesses feet again albeit maybe uncomfortably or with some reservations. With the tiny's uncomfortable attraction, that also adds alot of opportunities for the taunting and teasing about how the tiny likes their feet, and sexual humiliation by the orc and possibly her sisters with their feet, absolutely brilliant. 

Even though it may be far from now, I look forward to that story, and hope to see lots of orc boot, insole, sock, toejam, and of course stinky feet dominate a poor (or lucky : ) ) human man. Love your work, and looking forward to reading your great writing again.



Author's Response:

In that case, I'll take my time to ensure the quality stays high! Indeed, I like the idea of the orc dominating a tiny man who is attracted to her feet, it will be interesting writing a story that is less focussed on the cruel nature of giantesses.

Reviewer: Sg20855 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 16 2018 12:31 AM Title: The girl who played with fairies

I'm not really into F/f stuff but great chapter none the less. Overall, it seems like you've been more descriptive with your writing in this chapter which I appreciate, such as when you described the fairy's boot insole as "blackened and soggy, still retaining some warmth from Sapphire's sweating foot." or when you described the female orc's feet as "wide and meaty" and the toes as thick and strong; likewise I like how descriptive you went with the toejam as well such as you describing the orc's as "a tangy orange in color and more solid than that of the dark elf, comparable to a soft cheese. The flavor was overwhelming cheesy too, with an intense sour kick." I hope to see more toe jam eating scenes in the future. Speaking of the boot insole, I appreciate how you included both in shoe and insole stuff in this chapter, hope to see more going forward as well, such as the person forcing the tiny to lick and scrape of all the gunk and sweat from their insole with their mouth and for them to eat it. I also greatly appreciated the return of female orc feet, albeit it was somewhat brief. I sincerely hope we get to see a female orc dominate a human man again with her boots, socks, toejam, and feet again. I also appreciated the brief sexual humilation bit towards the end, with the faeries laugjing and taunting the main character about their feeting turning them on and getting them to orgasm. Hope to see that expanded in future chapters. Lastly, I really enjoyed the final part of the story where you followed up with the character to see how they were doing with their new foot torture filled life and all the other torments that they are going through. I thought it added a lot to the story and hope to see this going forward in your stories. Overall, really great chapter, it's subtle, but it really seems like you stepped up your writing with this one, eager to see more, keep up the good work.

Author's Response:

Hey thank you for the added depth to your review, it gives me some insight into what people want to see. I felt like this one flowed a lot better whilst writing it, so I am glad the quality appears to be improved! It's good to know that you like the toejam stuff, I was worried that I might be going a tad too far but apparently not haha. So sure, more of that kinda thing coming up :)

Since the whole orc feet element went down so well, I'm starting to feel like writing the kind of story you describe. It won't be the next story, nor can I promise it will be soon, but I would enjoy writing a full story about a female orc and her tiny pet with an uncomfortable attraction to her stinky feet. Maybe the orc will even have sisters... 

Thanks again for the feedback, hope you enjoy further stories!

Reviewer: footboy28 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 13 2018 5:28 AM Title: The girl who played with fairies

great story! i enjoyed seeing the main character as a female for once. Keep up the good work. As for your next story i dont mind the delay. You always put great quality in your stories. Any hint as to whats next?



Author's Response:

Thanks! There's a couple in the works, one about a witch and her son and another about a trio of ogresses (think orcs but bigger and stinkier). Yeah I'm trying to slide female protags in here and there to mix things up a little. So long as it's a female dishing out the hurt, I don't mind writing about it!

Reviewer: footboy28 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 07 2018 5:43 PM Title: Museum of Magic

Any hint as to what your next story is gonna be about? I literally check this page every Friday to see if you have a new update. I’m your biggest fan!

Author's Response:

Next story is going to feature an alchemist who keeps a particularly nasty and vengeful fairy prisoner. When that fairy gets out, expect all kinds of trouble to break loose.

There you go! I had a lot of fun writing the next one, especially a certain part of it so I hope you have as much fun reading it. After the next there might be a bit of a delay on the story after and I'll have to break schedule however I'll put it out ASAP. Many thanks as always!

Reviewer: Sg20855 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2018 6:06 PM Title: Museum of Magic

Great chapter as always, loved the foot worship stuff as usual. Indeed a sadistic ending and I enjoyed it. I do hope to see more sexual torture stuff akin to the second chapter with the characters unwillingly being turned on  by the the tormentors feet. Also hope to see more sock and in shoe stuff as well as shoe or insole licking if you can work it in. As always, you've done a good job so far, keep it up. 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Yeah I realise that I've been lacking in terms of inshoe stuff so I will work it into future stories. I have an idea or two that revolves around cursed shoes and might even just write them both up despite being similar concepts and try to make them as different as possible. The unwilling sexual torment stuff was fun to write about too, there's a longer story in the works that revolves around that idea.

I probably shouldn't promise so much when I'm such a slow writer haha but I'm hoping it will motivate me.

Reviewer: footboy28 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 05 2018 2:42 PM Title: Museum of Magic

Man you werent kidding! That ending was sadistic as hell! I loved it! I hope theres some sexual torment in your future stories. Thats my favorite part!  Great work as always.

Reviewer: footboy28 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 28 2018 4:54 PM Title: Arthur the Demon-slayer

Great work as usual! Love twist at the end. Can’t wait for your next story! Can you give us a hint as to what’s next.

Author's Response:

I'm happy yu enjoyed it :) As to hints, I'm not sure that I could give a satisfactory one without flat out spoiling it haha. The next one will take place in a musuem of magical items and, as always, the protagonist won't get his happy ending!

Reviewer: Sg20855 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 26 2018 1:35 PM Title: The Thief and the Witch

Initially, I didn't think I'd like orc feet being featured in this story, but you've convinced me otherwise. Chapter was simply amazing, the foot/sexual torturer scenes were great, especially the toe jam eating scene and how you described, hope we can see more of that. Also hope we can see more F/m orc stuff after reading this, perhaps even a check up to see how Edward is either during or after his year long denial. Great stuff, hope to see more, keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad the story was so convincing, that is good to hear haha. I'd like to do more f/m orc stuff, might revisit it and there's a few ideas I'm toying with regarding them, so who knows! 

Reviewer: footboy28 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 23 2018 4:43 PM Title: The Thief and the Witch

Just read this story for the third time. Absolutely love the sexual torment you put in your stories! I can’t wait for the next story. You are by far my favorite author!

Author's Response:

I appreciate the high praise! Thanks for enjoying it so much haha, hope you like the next one just as much

Reviewer: angelus288 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 21 2018 7:53 PM Title: The Thief and the Witch

Not a fan of stinky feet, but I like the story nonetheless, though I wished Edward stayed with Alice as her footpet. I would like to see more stories with orcs also.



Author's Response:

Thank you for giving the story a chance, despite not liking stinky feet and thanks for leaving a review also. I appreciate it. There will be at least one more story featuring an orc.

Glad you liked the story too!

Reviewer: footboy28 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 21 2018 7:50 PM Title: The Thief and the Witch

Yes your back! Once again you nailed it! didnt think i would like the whole orc thing but man your writing is top notch. Cant wait to her more from you! Will you be updating weekly like before?



Author's Response:

I am! Will be updating weekly until I burn out, then will be releasing chapters without a schedule. 

I'm glad you like the orcs and my writing both! Aye I just see female orcs as smellier, greener, stronger human women, which seems to hit a few of my boxes.

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