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Reviewer: DigestedAlive Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 04 2021 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 2 - A Submissive Saturday

I love how submissive and obedient he is no matter how badly he is being humiliated.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: November 12 2018 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 2 - A Submissive Saturday

spooj... I like that word. I've not seen it used before. Here:

“Roll on your side, please,” she inquired of Robert, who complied.

I don't think "inquired" is the right word. Inquired makes me think of an "inquiry". I'm guessing you meant something like "instructed" (or "requested"). Maybe it was auto-correct gone wrong again? Or am I mistaken.

Here:

“Hands and knees, crawl over here to Robert’s feet, and beg him to suck on his cock,” Mistress Sara said with authority.

I don't think you mean for Cameron to beg Robort to suck on his own penis. I think you meant for it to say for Cameron to suck on Robert's penis. Like this:

“Hands and knees, crawl over here to Robert’s feet, and beg him to allow you to suck on his cock,” Mistress Sara said with authority.

 

Going back to this section:

For as much as she loved his devotion to her, truth was that she would never be caught out in public with him, unless he were shrunk and attached to her anklet as a charm or wrapped around her toe like a ring, perhaps.

 

Yeah I notice these details. Sara has just gone ahead and used him as an acessory, just as was written previously. Cameron thinks nothing of it because he doesn't know the thinking and he's unquestioning anyway. For her it's a compromise it sounds like, because she has Cameron for the weekend and doesn't want to leave him at home.



Author's Response: Good constructive comments. Clearly some edits will need to be made and I appreciate you pointing this out as it could lead to confusion.

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