[Report This]Date: November 06 2020 4:46 PM Title: Parting
Was so happy to see that you were able to sneak in a bit more foot play in this chapter. The way that you describe Ness's various scents, and how the little guy takes them in is really nice. Though in this case it was the whole act of him fetching her shoes that really kind of stole the show.
It's easy to forget in all our fantasizing. Just how overwhelming simple tasks would become at at tiny size. And how much that effort would mean to both parties. I think you did a wonderful job of capturing the emotional side of the act. And their parting for the day. It really warms my heart to see the bits in which Ness muses over how much her lovers dedication means to her. And I think it's safe to say that it's that part of her, which serves to fuel the little guys desire to worship her. This really is like the perfect dynamic. ^.^
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for all of your kind words! I'm so sorry for taking so long to check in on these reviews, but I'm so grateful for the time you took to read and respond to the story! I'm eager to return to writing size fic, and hope that down the road you're able to continue enjoying my stories. Thank you so much again and stay well! :)
[Report This]Date: November 05 2020 4:00 PM Title: Hungering
Yet another wonderful chapter. I really like the way that you are slowly revealing tidbits of the events that lead to the "Diminishing" And how very much it means to Ness that her lover trusts her so completely. This is the kind of bond that most macrophiles dream of their entire lives.
Seems that you were already way ahead of my musings from a few chapters back. As this one featured Ness getting her backside worshipped a little. Which was quite a pleasant surprise. Though honestly, everything about their interactions has been pretty wonderful so far. Such a great story!
[Report This]Date: November 04 2020 5:15 PM Title: Cleansing
Oh my goodness, this chapter was even more amazing than the first. Have always had a serious soft spot for bath and shower scenes in sizeplay settings. And this was most definitely one of the most nicely written ones I've ever read. It had an incredible warmth and thoughtfulness to it. That make it easy to envision the whole thing unfolding before my eyes.
Was so happy to see some subtle tie ins their past life. And the part reinforcing that the little guy really does have a thing for her feet. As if the scene in the first chapter was not proof enough. ^.^ Am going to keep my fingers cross for more play along those lines in the chapter to come. As well as more rump play. Since this chapter was a serious tease in that department. :)
[Report This]Date: November 04 2020 4:32 PM Title: Awakening
Have been wanting to sit down and read this story for the longest time. And from what I have seen in this first chapter, it was well worth the wait. The level of detail and the atmosphere is absolutely incredible. And was on a level that I rarely ever see in this wonderful sizeplay community of ours. Even better still was the dynamic between the two characters. There is genuine love and kindness on both sides. And yet they both seem to relish in their newfound roles. I'm really excited to read more! :)
Date: March 22 2020 11:16 PM Title: Parting
Love this story and how it’s not just a smut take on everything and has real feeling characters
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I've been having so much fun writing these two, I'm so glad to hear that you've enjoyed it =)
Date: January 31 2020 6:57 AM Title: Awakening
That's one hell of a good morning!
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it! =)
Date: January 30 2020 1:57 PM Title: Awakening
My gosh this is well written. There's a few times where it says HE and should say SHE, but wow. Love it otherwise.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! And thanks for the heads up; I try to read over each chapter a few times before I post them, but I invariably miss something like that. I'll go back over and clean it up. Thanks for reading!
Date: January 21 2020 9:39 AM Title: Awakening
Hi. I love your story. I'm not much into submission, pet, etc., but your writing style is so addictive that I'm actually enjoying the story. I love the feeling of love between both protagonists, the True Love. I'm really looking forward to reading more about it. Thanks you so much.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I've got a lot planned for the next couple weeks, so I hope that you keep reading, and hope to keep putting out content that you enjoy!
[Report This]Date: June 26 2019 5:58 PM Title: Hungering
Extremely erotic. You write so detailed and aware of the all the enviroment - so addictive reading this... you place the reader right into the story. I have to agree with Tallie '100 percent', just so incredible! please, please, Please Never Stop! If someone in Hollywood would use this for a script in a Movie it would be so perfect...
I especally love the interaction between them when their teasing one another, it feels so right. Makes me wonder if you haven't really experienced this in real life! :)
I be adding you to my fav's now.
Amazing stuff!
Author's Response:
I really appreciate your kind words! I plan to keep writing for as long as folks keep enjoying it! Thanks so much for the fave and I hope you continue to enjoy the story! Chapter 5 is well underway.
Date: June 26 2019 6:05 AM Title: Awakening
Yep!
Author's Response:
So happy to hear that, thank you!
Date: June 25 2019 5:48 PM Title: Hungering
This chapter is SO PERFECT! I mean, wow. You captured the essence of the pet/toy-owner relationship perfectly blended with the romantic partner relationship that is still maintained. I would LOVE to see this explored again in another chapter, maybe(just my request!) one that has a scene like both of the ones in “Chapter 7: Rendezvous” of SoleEmbrace’s “Giantess Dating Diary”(especially the one between Eliot and Madison)?
Also, if we could see a flashback chapter of them throughout the early stages of their relationship discussing, deciding, and then actually going through with the Diminshing?
Either way, KEEP IT UP! Your writing is amazing!
Author's Response:
This is so kind of you to say! I'm so happy that you're liking it! We will absolutely see that dynamic explored more in future chapters. I am unfamiliar with that story, but I will check it out tonight! Thanks for the recommendation.
Yes! We will see pre-Diminishing content and the Diminishing itself eventually. Thanks again and I hope that you'll continue to enjoy the story!
Date: June 25 2019 3:52 PM Title: Awakening
Continues to be a gorgeous peak at domestic life. Love her thrill at power.
Author's Response:
You're so kind, thank you! <3 They're both loving their new dynamic, I'm excited to continue to share their story.
Date: June 25 2019 11:28 AM Title: Awakening
You are a very skilled stylist, it really brings the interactions to life. Please keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm excited to continue sharing this, so I plan to! Hope you'll keep enjoying it! =)
Date: June 25 2019 9:46 AM Title: Awakening
Ah ok. Also, my apologies for the typo in my last message.
Author's Response:
Absolutely no worries! Hope you're enjoying the story!
Date: June 25 2019 6:39 AM Title: Hungering
Is the whole "pet" thing a roleplay scenario? Do they still treat each other as equals, or does she reaaly view him as subhuman now?
Author's Response:
Somewhere between a roleplay and a kink. She doesn't consider him subhuman, those affirmations just got her turned on in the moment. Future chapters will continue to explore these two as a loving partnership, but some powerplay comes through during sex.
Date: March 22 2019 5:59 PM Title: Awakening
You've created a real and powerful sense of intimacy here, I am in awe. I never expected to actually care about the characters amidst so much explicit content.
This is really outstanding stuff here. You've taught me quite a lot with these nine thousand words. I know it can be hard to keep writing, but, please, never stop.
Author's Response:
Tallie thank you so much for these kind words. This was so sweet. I fell quite a bit behind when life got in the way, but I am working on editing a third chapter now that will be up by the end of this weekend. I hope I can continue to write content that you enjoy reading!
Date: February 11 2019 9:32 AM Title: Awakening
Such vivid writing, great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading! I'm so happy to hear you liked it. Chapter 2 just went live. Hope you enjoy!
Date: February 10 2019 7:48 PM Title: Awakening
I would love to shrink you and put you in my vigina and get pleasure from you. A giantess can dream. sorry if i went to far but i was dying to say that.
Author's Response:
Aw <33 so happy you enjoyed my story. Thank you!
Date: February 10 2019 2:35 PM Title: Awakening
This is amazing! I love it! Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!! I'm so happy you enjoyed it; thanks for taking the time to share how you feel. Chapter two is on its way, just working on edits!