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Reviewer: VendingMasheen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2019 5:45 PM Title: At the outset.....

Sorry, I forgot to rate in my last review. Here!

Reviewer: VendingMasheen Signed [Report This]
Date: September 10 2019 3:39 PM Title: At the outset.....

Really digging this man, I love it! Looking forward to seeing some 'gross' and odorous stuff too :)

Reviewer: Amista6 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 02 2019 8:04 PM Title: Steve

Great chapter!  this is my favorite so far even though he died at the end I enjoye reading everything that happened tohimon the way.  Great details.  I like how he had no choice but to enter her asshole or die.

Reviewer: Amista6 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02 2019 8:01 PM Title: Brian

I will always wonder what happened to him. My theory is he never leaves and has to live there like a scavenger for the rest of his long life but who knows???

Reviewer: Amista6 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 02 2019 8:00 PM Title: At the outset.....

This story is great, I love it!

It's true that  two chapters were a little short, but your most recent chapter was amazing!  the only tip I'd like to add is maybe a brief description of the woman. nothing too detailed; brunette, plump or skinny, details of the ass. anything to paint a basic image in the readers mind.

Reviewer: arselover Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 02 2019 5:30 AM Title: At the outset.....

really great concept and idea, wished the chapters were longer.

Reviewer: Microputianwomen Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31 2019 7:38 AM Title: At the outset.....

Very goooooooood story😍😍😍😍

Please contiue ...

Reviewer: Jogibussi Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29 2019 6:11 AM Title: At the outset.....

 

Very good opening. Thanks that you wrote a story to this concept. Here can everyone see the pics to the story. https://www.deviantart.com/papajogick/art/Selfie-Challange-01-770022506

 

Reviewer: arselover Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28 2019 1:32 AM Title: At the outset.....

A usual good idea but... word count is like 10 times too short I guess for something ^^

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