Date: February 16 2023 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
Fantastic chapter. We’re angling towards what I was hoping for which was an opportunity for Audrey to grow. I was hoping it would be at Jackie’s expense but I’ll take what I can get. Hopefully she’s smart enough that she doesn’t fail for Jackie’s bullshit. Looking forward to her rationalizing using the height for herself. And I really hope she takes it all. The kids don’t need any. lol.
This is definitely the most invested I’ve ever been with this story Johnbart. Can’t wait for the next chapter!
Date: February 16 2023 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
Dam, Jackie just gets more and more hateable with every action she does.
[Report This]Date: December 14 2022 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
Not sure what some of the recent hate is about. The characters are gripping, especially for a fetish story. I like how you take sexy, and in Audrey’s case, dominant non-con scenarios, and try to make them as relatable as possible. Is it normal? Of course not. But neither is this fetish. This story is interesting because you take the abnormal and inject it into a slice-of-life setting. It makes the fetish fodder less cringe (not an easy feat), and easier to escape into.
Date: August 17 2022 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
I’ll admit to not having read every chapter. Shrinking by itself is something I’ve got to be in the mood for. Ever since that permanent height shift that made Jackie a giantess I’ve been glued to this one, though. Can’t wait for the last few chapters! Personally I’m hoping that Audrey somehow ends up with all the extraneous height thats floating around.
Date: July 23 2021 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
Please tell me he's not going to be an idiot and leave the cellphone on...
Date: August 13 2020 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow I'm loving the progress. And here I thought the size disparity couldn't get any larger ...can't wait for the next chapter!! Thanks again!!
Date: March 23 2020 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
I haven’t left a review in a while, but I have been keeping up with the story and I just have to say that you are tremendously talented. I absolutely love this story and I’m genuinely anxious about what is coming next. I want him to be happy with Audrey, I want him to live his fantasy with Jackie, but I also want Amanda to screw him over and torment him for the rest of his itty bitty life. Keep up the incredible work!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the glowing comment! Just to assure you: I want Desmond to be happy with Audrey just like you. I want Desmond to live his fantasy with Jackie just like you do. And I also want Amanda to screw him over and torment him for the rest of his itty bitty for the rest of his life too. Obviously, not all three of these things can happen. What I can tell you is that I will do my best to make an ending that is satisfying and makes sense for the characters.
Date: March 19 2020 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
I realy like this story (thank you and congratulations), but somethings dont make sense, Because i like this story i try dont look to much about this. I care about the story and i think you are a good writer with a good imagination, because this i fell sad when i see things without sense.
His mon didnt protect him from Amanda. She know Amanda torture Desmond and she let Amanda alone with him? Why Amanda know everything after
“I know. I’ll explain everything. To you,” I gestured at my mom. “I don’t trust Amanda to not tell the whole world.”
My mother took no issue with that. “Wait in the hallway, Amanda.”
Desmont Mom is stupidy and crazy? She didnt nothing with amanda for her make Desmont runaway form home and she will not do nothing after she try sabotage his chances to grow?
How i told, i like your story, i think you are doing a realy nice thing here, but dont let your nice character sound crazy, stupdy and non sense.
PS - sorry my bad english lol
Author's Response:
Hey Russell, I made some edits to the chapter after reading your comment. I agree that letting Amanda in on everything after expressly leaving her out in the chapter before didn't make much sense. So I added in some scenes to address those issues. Thanks for pointing this out because you've made the story better for it.
And about Desmond's mom not doing anything, I don't think that is necessarily true. I have Desmond's mom tell her to leave the doll store. Desmond's mom also has a lot swirling in her head right now, and Amanda has gotten good at manipulating people over the years. With those two factors combined, I think it makes sense that Desmond's mom is necessarily as protective as she could be.
Desmond's mom doesn't seem to be a fan favorite, and I've noticed that quite a bit.
Anyway, I'm glad you like my story enough to heap valid criticisim onto it. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: October 19 2019 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great first chapter! I'm already hooked 👀lol
Date: October 17 2019 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
Continue to impress! One-on-one time with Vicky soon to return the ‘favor’? Hehe. Also, is she the second tallest girl on the team?
Date: October 16 2019 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love slow shrink and I absolutely love this story. Quite looking forward to where it goes from chapter 14, which brings up the question... Is 15 going to be posted after we are caught up to https://giantesscity.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=60&t=145215 / will it be posted here first?
Author's Response: I’ve been writing 15 for a while now. Once I upload 14 and we’re caught up, I will upload it everywhere at the same time. I only found giantessworld recently, so I figured I would start uploading my latest story, which I’d already begun on my deviantart and giantesscity. So to answer your question, the new chapters will be here, giantesscity, and on deviantart.
[Report This]Date: October 11 2019 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great work! Would love to see Vicky make a return at some point!
Author's Response: Thank you! Vicky will definitely be making an appearance very soon.
[Report This]Date: September 26 2019 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
Amazing story! Keep up the good work.
[Report This]Date: September 22 2019 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love this story, reminds me a little bit of my experiences with girls haha. This is definitely one of my favorite stories on this sit.
[Report This]Date: September 19 2019 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
So glad he's going back to college, can't wait to see how Jackie and Maggie react to him now! And I can't believe this after 8 great chapters, but I'm proud to be the first to give this the stars it deserves.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Date: August 06 2019 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
You have done a wonderful job showing these characters to us! It's only been three chapters but I am very much rooting for this plucky little hero and his sweet southern giantess.
Can't wait to read more!
Date: August 03 2019 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great start! Eager to see what comes next!
Author's Response: Thanks! I’m eager to write what’s next!
Date: August 02 2019 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hey great work so far!
I’m a fan of footplay, and I don’t see that tag, but I’m still very excited to see where this story goes. Being a short guy myself, I love romance between a short dude and taller girl, especially in a story where the guy becomes much shorter. ;)
Can’t wait to see how Des and Jackie’s relationship progresses, how he shrinks, and how she reacts! Keep it up!
P.S. I love the name Jackie for a girl! Very cute!
Author's Response: Thank you! I’m not really into feet myself, but perhaps it’ll be in here in a small way later on. We’ll see what happens. I wanted to explore a shrinking story at college. Hopefully you enjoy the future chapters. I already have a lot written, so expect regular updates.
And I totally agree on the name Jackie. I’ve known a few smoking hot Jackies in my life, which is why I probably have an affinity for the name. Really glad you’re enjoying it!