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Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 20 2019 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 5

I was beginning to think that Des might actually be over-exaggerating about his sister, but that’s definitely not the case… Amanda really is pure evil… Lets just hope Jackie isn’t the same… 👀 lol



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. Yeah, Amanda definitely lived up to Desmond's hype. She is cold-hearted and mean-spirited. I like writing the mean giantess character and the gentle giantess character. I think Amanda fits in quite nicely with the former, Audrey fits in with the latter, and Jackie straddles the middle. As the story progresses, there will be a conflict between these countervailing forces, and Desmond will be at the center of it all. How exactly it will unfold will remain a mystery.

Reviewer: WTH I Love This Signed [Report This]
Date: August 13 2019 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 5

Yes! That last paragraph just made my day!
I can’t wait to see their relationship dynamic as he keeps shrinking, and I wanna see her meet his family. Part of me really, really wants Desmond to tell Jackie everything his sister has done, and I want it to lead to a full-on confrontation between Jackie, the girl who loves him, and Amanda, the bitch who treats him as sub-human.
Great writing, keep it up!

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