[Report This]Date: October 27 2019 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 12
Okay I've gotta admit, Jackie definitely deserves some points for helping keep Des in college because she really didn’t have too… 👀 lol
[Report This]Date: October 15 2019 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 12
Story aside, it's nice to see someone writing with such great attention to detail, including clothes. I have a complete mental image of Jackie, both from an objective viewpoint and Desmond's, their conversations feel like real conversations, and she seems like an actual, living character.
That said, the story rules too.
Date: October 11 2019 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 12
I absolutely love Jackie! The make-out scene was great, and I love how much she loves him. The way that she drops everything to take care of him, the fact that she actually apologized for being too domineering towards his mom, and the fact that she gets him clothes to feel like he’s still a man while getting all dolled up just for him! I think we all wish we were Desmond!
Every installment is worth the wait! You’re an awesome writer!
[Report This]Date: October 11 2019 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 12
Dude, it's simply one of the best story about GTS I've ever read, I read the 12 chapters straight, keep going dude.
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you! I don’t know if it’s one of the best, but I’m definitely glad you’re enjoying it!