Reviewer: MacroGod Signed [Report This]
Date: October 28 2019 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 13

And just when I was starting to think that Jackie might actually not be that bad, she just HAD to prove me wrong by going crazy about Des’ exes… Also, how did she know that orgasming makes Des shrink, because I’m pretty sure he still hasn’t told her that detail yet, so that’s very suspicious… But even with all that being said, I’m sure this next chapter is about to be the hottest one yet… 👀 lol Fantasic story!

Author's Response: I believe I meant to put in a scene with Desmond telling Jackie that when he orgasms he shrinks. I think I accidentally cut that scene out. It’s a plot hole. My bad... But thanks for all the reviews, MacroGod!