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Reviewer: Ask-Giantess-Lover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 31 2020 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 20

Genuinely incredible work so far. I hope to see more soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you. I plan to continue the story. It just might take a while :(

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 29 2020 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 20

This story is pretty hot. But it also leaves me wondering what will happen. Will he just shrink into nothingness? I don't hope so, because then there wouldn't be a story anymore.

Thank you for writing and until next time, this is Three dog AWWW and you're listening to Galaxy News Radio. Bringing you the Truth, no matter how bad it hurts!

Sorry, I had to end with that one, this Fallout 3 quote has been stuck in my head since ... 2008



Author's Response:

I don't exactly understand the relevance of Fallout 3 in this instance, but thank you for the praise! Desmond isn't dumb. He's just paralyzed by his overwhelming sexual desires. The question is whether or not his thinking mind will prevail, or will his cock continue to guide his actions?

 

If you've ever heard of "Man vs. Man" or "Man vs. Nature", this story is "Man vs. Cock". :)

Reviewer: WTH I Love This Signed [Report This]
Date: January 22 2020 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 20

This is story is so great! And this chapter was no exception! 

"I was literally a toy to these women now.... I got passed around the room to be poked, fondled and played with." I've always loved the "sleepover" type scenario like this one. So I must say, this would be a dream come true! ;)

Part of me is hoping that there is some kind of target height, or that at least Jackie will eventually have some control over it(because I'm positive that she's the cause of it). I just don't personally like anything smaller than Minkin because interaction seems so difficult smaller than that, but I guess we'll see what you do! Also, Desmond's mom's reaction to this size would be really interesting to see! 

Keep up the great work! 



Author's Response:

I always love your comments. Very insightful and interesting. You'll just have to wait and see. (I admit, this story has taken a lot longer than I originally thought.)

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