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Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 17 2022 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 45

I still think Jackie is hot, and only has gotten better with age.

And part of me still wants to see her and Desmond playing.

But I also do wish Jackie got comeuppance now. Like I wish/hope in the end Desmond gets his height back (maybe with interest, Jackie loses her big height sand it's split between Desmond and Audrey) and Jackie is left destitute/publicly ostracised. 

Another great chapter you've written, and I can't wait to read more. 

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