Date: September 26 2019 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
I've tried to collaborate w/ other writers before and I found it very distracting. Maybe, you just need to block everything else out and create some space in your head. It's good to get fresh ideas, but you also need to allow yourself the time and space to let your own imagination take over ~ yeah, you'll have to edit the hell out of it, but still, your best work comes from YOU! Lots of ideas just muck up the wheels....
I'll have to check out that discord though, sounds fun! Thanks Stub. ;)
Date: September 25 2019 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hey Stub, Nice job on the render. The story is pretty good, I liked it. It seems like you're fishing for some type of response from the readers here... I think your a Hell-of-a-writer, you've put together some very attractive works over the years, but, I think your in a rut... searching for that eye-catching tribute to GTS World.
I got it! You just need a 'REAL GOOD IDEA' Right? Right. So here it is..
A very wealthy middle-aged actress that has two teen-aged daughters (from two different men) is starting to realize that her Movie careeer is nearly all washed up, so she goes on vacation to clear her mind.
Her DAughters decide to go with her ~ to the Bahamas. They are all three wwell introduced into the story (Nearly a full chapter or 2 playing out each one) So we really get to know each of them.
Then, along comes some dude... the main char, as far as that goes. A full chap on him and his life, too. So the reader really gets to him ~ even before they all meet.
Then, somehow, they are in the same Hotel and The Actress is recognized by our Dude and he is 'LOve-struck' (Could be the Title- Hint)
He buys some potion from a little old woman and - not thinking anything of it... he drinks it down. Then, he tries to get close to the 'Actress' but ends up getting found by one of her daughters...
She captures him, thinking that he is the most wonderful thing she's ever seen and before he knows it,,, he becomes their pet.
I've never cpmmisioned anything, and I don't plan on it...
Just thought you might need a little inspiration..
Take it for whatever you think it's worth. :)
Author's Response:
I am stuck in a rut. I have plenty of ideas but I'm too indecisive; I hope to make a visual novel sometime too. I would encourage you to join the 'Macro Authors' Repository' server on Discord (link to it on my profile page); we often discuss ideas on there. There are many well-known names on there, including myself, who started the server. At the moment, I am focusing on my commission piece and was only able to upload this piece due to it being already written. Maybe I will upload my other stories again in the future.