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Reviewer: ShrinkJoe Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05 2024 4:32 AM Title: Chapter X-32: Frape Part 2

I just read this chapter again, and I am wildly curious as to what sort of unaware shenanigans David would have with Ani. 

Reviewer: Theresa Yuen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2024 9:49 AM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

Greetings Kenny,

Many thanks for the valuable feedback.  I’ve been integrating the cultural/moral difference between the Ladies Supremacy Republic (LSR) versus the Asiatic Nation (AN).  Apart from the cultural similarity that both nations are of a female dominant culture.  What's more, the AN has mastered the technology of artificial procreation, so it’s unnecessary to have any male citizen in the AN society. 

Grounded on your storyline, most of the LSR ladies wouldn’t consider any minuscule guy as homo sapiens.  Hence, all minuscule guys are merely consumable products, and this view has been moulded in the LSR’s culture.  In due course, Tess would meet Mark, and learn about his ordeal as a minuscule guy surviving in the LSR.  For the time being, I’ve written a new chapter to bring in the LSR cultural view regarding minuscule guys.  I opted to use an indirect approach by utilizing two Asiatic Nation characters being unsympathetic to the situation that there are frightened, minuscule escapees hiding/moving around in the LSR surroundings, and they merely become accustomed to the LSR ethos.

https://www.giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=10324&chapter=40&textsize=3

Sincerely,

Tess


Reviewer: Theresa Yuen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 04 2024 4:35 AM Title: Chapter X-5: In the beginning...

Dear Kenny,

I suppose that it would be sad to see you, a talented novelist, to give up your endeavour for creative writing.  It seems that the storyline would be thought-provoking if you would add a chapter to describe an episode when Dianne was amateurish on smuggling tinies out of harm's way.  

Tess


Reviewer: Theresa Yuen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 03 2024 8:35 AM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

Dear Kenny,


I’ve written a few chapters on various scenarios when the Ladies Supremacy Republic (LSR) team gathers with the Asiatic team.  I placed various subtle hints towards the cultural differences between the two nations.  For example, in the following chapter, I described the different viewpoints on the way that the LSR ladies would view miniscule guys as just a product, such as being used as shoe inserts.  While from the Asiatic nation’s perspective, miniscule ladies have equal rights.

https://www.giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=10324&textsize=4&chapter=35


Please have a read & comment.


Tess


Reviewer: Theresa Yuen Signed [Report This]
Date: February 23 2024 4:49 AM Title: Chapter X-4: In flight service

Dear Kenny,

Currently, I’m writing a chapter from another angle, from the perspective of a male tiny within the Ladies Supremacy Republic (LSR).  It is a spinoff from “The Underfoot Railroad” via your works of fiction, which you’ve given me the go-ahead earlier.  

Preface - Since President Dianne Trent of the LSR has successfully drum up support for the propaganda that female individuals were being told repeatedly that they were victims of an oppressive male hierarchy.  Then, to right the supposed wrong of toxic masculinity, President Dianne Trent cleverly initiated the mandatory miniaturization process.  These days, all men have been shrunken to the height of merely three inches and all their civil rights have been put out of the ladies’ minds.  All the miniscule men are mass-produced synthetically.  Since they’re just synthetic products, men don’t have any identity whatsoever.  Hence, the tiny guy in this chapter will be named as ‘Nameless’.  The story resumes from the time when he saw the frightening episode as Winkie inadvertently stepped on another male tiny in the ladies' dressing room.    

Tess




Author's Response:

Hey Tess,

Of course, this work in itself is an inspiration from many others.   Your work is your work, but feel free to draw any elements from any work you find interesting.

But in any case, sounds interesting, I'll have to read it once it comes out.

Kenny

Reviewer: TinyGuyyyy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 16 2024 9:20 PM Title: Chatper X-66: Sarah's short reprieve

This was simply the best news of 2024 so far! WELCOME BACK

Reviewer: Badguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 16 2024 5:59 PM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

So glad to see this story back! I re-read it all the time. 

Reviewer: ThickBeast Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 10 2023 11:56 PM Title: Chapter X-64: Dinnertime - Part 2

Damn Poor Mark. I would have absolutely stayed with Tracy and even convince her could she go to New Zealand. Taking a LOT of risks of going with a absolute stranger even if she was with the Underground railroad. 

I'd say he's in a worse place than in chapter one, sure he's in NZ. But he’s completely fearful and borderline broken because of demonic Sarah

I don’t know whats up with Dianne. Railroad agent/contact my ass. 

I was really rooting for him to endure but I understand if he just lets it go. I adore feet but crazy will turn me off just as fast ie Sarah, her mom, etc. 

Not Kelly though, I need my Kelly, yes. Yes big feet, athletic tomboy, teasing Kelly

Keep up da story, if your still continuing it. I really like it, well thought out personally. 




Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: TinyGuyyyy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2023 7:26 PM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

Please we need new stories kenny!! haha ._.



Author's Response:

Hey TinyGuyy,

Normally I don't respond till comments till i post the next chapter, but since it's been so long i figured i'd just make a note here that the story isn't abandoned but I just haven't had the time or inspiration really to focus on this.  So as long as i dont die, the story will be finished at some point.   

In any case, yea, the dolls seemed like a fun idea at first and then just became rather boring.   

Kenny

Reviewer: partyman678 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2023 5:40 PM Title: Chapter X-4: In flight service

it would be cool if diane decided to use mark like sarah had as an arch support within her own pair of flats during a flight 



Author's Response:

Hey Partyman,

Normally I don't respond till comments till i post the next chapter, but since it's been so long i figured i'd just make a note here that the story isn't abandoned but I just haven't had the time or inspiration really to focus on this.  So as long as i dont die, the story will be finished at some point.   

In any case, in regards to you previous mentions, there will still be some more inshoe stuff in the story, but we are nearing the end, so no promises for anything!

Kenny

Reviewer: Jurdzi Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06 2023 2:44 PM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

It is really nice to see you back! Cant wait to see more chapters, now that I know you are done with dolls stuff. Have you ever considered to create a spinoff  from this universe, lets say with a completely different characters, showing brother-sisters or father-daughters interactions?



Author's Response:

Hey Jurdzi,

Normally I don't respond till comments till i post the next chapter, but since it's been so long i figured i'd just make a note here that the story isn't abandoned but I just haven't had the time or inspiration really to focus on this.  So as long as i dont die, the story will be finished at some point.   

In regards to your question, while i have thought about spin offs (and even written some stuff) i make absolutely no promises as i'm already having trouble writing now as it is.   And to be honest, those particular topics while I'm not completely against the idea isn't something that also particularly appeals to me, so I dont think it's something i'd be focusing on.     

I could mention some of my ideas but it feels wrong to dangle out a carrot i have no idea if i will be able to deliver, so i'll just leave it at that.

Kenny

Reviewer: partyman678 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2023 4:28 AM Title: Chapter X-64: Dinnertime - Part 2

More inshoe action (especially barefoot) with Diane is something I hope you are considering!

Reviewer: TinyGuyyyy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 04 2023 3:40 AM Title: Chapter X-65: Punishment - Part 2

I'll admit, that part of the story with the plastic dolls doesn't really grab my attention, but still, I'm really glad the story is back. I hope the waiting time was not due to any personal problem, be well!

Reviewer: TinyGuyyyy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01 2023 5:37 PM Title: Chapter X-64: Dinnertime - Part 2

Please Kenny, don't you dare leave us hahaha come baaaaaaack



Author's Response: Hey TinyGuy,

Sorry for the wait.  Plenty of excuses not worth getting into.  Hopefully will have more chapters out sooner next time. 

But yea, story is not dead - things just got in the way these last few months.

Kenny

Reviewer: TinyGuyyyy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2023 11:38 PM Title: Chapter X-64: Dinnertime - Part 2

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Pleaseeeeeeeeee, we need more of this story.

Reviewer: Wwsl Signed [Report This]
Date: February 17 2023 10:56 PM Title: Chapter X-64: Dinnertime - Part 2

No small character has died in a long time🥺



Author's Response:

Hey Wwsl

Unfortunately at this point in the story the Mark will basically be the only tiny the story focuses on.    So we "basically" won't have other tinies within this story.   I may at some point include some of the other things i've written that's part of the same "story" but that focuses on a much more non-linear storyline, as a seperate story.  However, that will not exist till i finish this one.

Kenny

Reviewer: Theresa Yuen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 17 2023 2:30 AM Title: Chapter X-2: Through security

Greetings Kenny,
Interestingly, you mentioned that Dianne “could just as easily be Italian” in your earliest chapter, “To the Airport”.  I like to offer a feminine perspective, as it would be better if you would put additional focus on the elegant qualities towards the character.  This way, you would present your appreciation towards her elegance and sophistication.  For example, as follows:
Dianne has all the attributes of the essence of “la bella figura”, the Italian beauty motto, which represents as the “beautiful behavior”.  She has benefitted from a deep Italian upbringing, as she endeavours to conduct herself with articulacy, good manners, and elegance to maintain good relationships with her friends and loved ones.  She has a classic, distinct characteristics that heighten her Mediterranean physique, besides her olive skin, dark eyes, and dark hair, she has aristocratic, high cheekbones, and a nose with a prominent slightly aquiline bridge.  Her figure is somewhat slender women with medium breasts and narrow hips, yet she retains a little curve. 
Cheers, Tess 


Author's Response:

Hey Tess,

Thank you for the review, and I'm glad you are enjoying the story.

Thank you for your suggestion.  To be clear, I'm being deliberately vague with whether or not Dianne is italian (or anything else for that matter) because, in my experience, it's very difficult to actually know where somebody comes from based on appearance alone, and also, because I'm fine with the reader coming up with their own ideas and details for the character, as i think that peoples own imagination often can do a much better job with filling out character details then anything i can write, at least for all readers.

As such, it seems you have come up with your own ideas for the character, which I'm happy works for you.

Kenny

Reviewer: TinyGuyyyy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 05 2023 3:08 AM Title: Chapter X-63: Dollhouse - Punishment

Hello Kenny! I understand, at some point this story will come to an end and that's all right, I think that good things really need to have an ending and I believe it will be very good given your writing history. I'm just hoping you don't give up on the site, that you keep writing here new stories, new characters, new worlds, because it's not an exaggeration to say that you're one of the best! Without wanting to detract from other stories, but I think vore, breasts, ass, indestructible little man, things are so boring and without emotion... you know how to write and describe so well in this world of giant feet that I really hope we continue with you here .



Author's Response:

Hey TinyGuy

Thank you again for the kind words.   And yes, all things do come to an end, so hopefully i will finish the story here with something that is satisfying.

Kenny

Reviewer: TinyGuyyyy Signed [Report This]
Date: January 31 2023 2:33 PM Title: Chapter X-62: Dollhouse Part 4

So... I can't lie that I miss new chapters 😅 haha



Author's Response:

Sorry for the wait! I just keep finding myself being busy and then writing more than i like.

I dont think there is too much left at this point to be honest.   There are some things i still want to feature but i have this tendency to continue to expand storylines with new stuff so at this point I'm going to try to be more deliberate with the story.  Not that this will end anytime soon, at this rate i'm guessing the summer and probably 10 or so more chapters.  I've also decided the bonus chapter will be separate story just so i can check this one as complete, but i will be writing that nonetheless. 

Kenny

Reviewer: Jurdzi Signed [Report This]
Date: December 29 2022 2:15 PM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

Couple of thoughts:

  • There is someone by name Jennifer (I think) mentioned thorought this story as she had been treating him horribly, until he ended up with Tracy. Are you planning to further introduce this character later on, or is it just a small hint of Marks past that you are not planning to exlore anymore?
  • I am surprised none of these college girls has any pantyhose on. It could make his intimate experience with their feets even more challeging.
  • I wish Amoe used some broom instead of a vacuum cleaner. Given her limited sight, she could have beaten a hell out of him without even noticing, while leaving him in some pile of dust. An honorable mention to a famous scene from Honey I Shrunk the Kids movie.
  • I would love to see Mark turned into an object with these college girls, just like he is presented as a shoe insert with Diane and Sarah. He could be a simple clothes or hair decoration, or perhaps a jewerly (ear ring, toe rigs, etc.) He was already tied up once by Crystal, so I hope there will be some more bondage. By other words, to continue dehuminizing him in the clutches of these wannaby friends.
  • Like I said in my previous comment, I would love to see more of Linh, and perhaps Kelly as well, given her size and indication that she would love to wear him as a good luck charm.

Great story, one of my all time favorites right away. I am sad I need to wait for every single chapter now that I finished what you have already posted. I hope you will find a peace and balance in your life that would allow you to not only finish this story, but also posting the remaining chapters on a regular basis.


CYA!



Author's Response:

Hey Jurdzi,


Glad you are liking the story! Here are some notes of mind in regards to your thoughts, in case you want some insight to what I'm thinking with this story.  So spoilers? i guess


*Jeniffer is not in scope for this story, and is just color and context for the story for now.  


*Now that you metnion it, I wish i had thought of panthouse, but alas.


*Again, broom is a great idea.


*Objectification is something i have thought about in the college girls story but as of now i dont have anything that meets that particular criteria specifically in this scope of the story.  It might end up being part of a bonus chapter, or another story at some point as i do have some storylines already outlines.  No promises on if and when that will ever happen though.


*I will consider Linh your "Vote" then for the bonus chapter!


Again, happy you are enjoying the story, and thanks for the kind words.


Kenny


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