Date: March 02 2020 9:00 PM Title: Meet our main characters
I really enjoyed the first three chapters and I look forward to more.
As far as suggestions go, I really love booty content and slow anal Vore.
One idea I had for the party scenario is the girls play strip twister with tiny Riku on the mat and he has to try and escape or do some task all the while the girls are falling on him and getting undressed until it all leads up to this big pile of naked sweaty girls with Riku in the middle.
Also it could be a good idea to include some of what content is in the chapter in the chapter beginning summary thing so if you do stuff like farts or other tags people may not like then they know which parts to avoid!
I think the shorter chapters are fine especially since I struggle with the same thing in my stories, as long as chapters are updated fairly frequently!
Cheers.
Author's Response:
I do like the idea of including content tags in the beginning of chapters, I'll begin doing that. And not to give too much away, but anal vote is also my favorite. Feet is a little bit harder for me to write, so I am challenging myself with this next chapter, BUT, I have a LOT of plans for some butt content so stay tuned 😉
[Report This]Date: November 17 2019 5:51 PM Title: Meet our main characters
Loved the second chapter too. Glad you liked my suggestions last time, seems like Brooke will be fun for them.
Three thoughts:
1. Personally, I prefer when people name their chapters. Makes it easier to go back to something I liked when there's many chapters.
2. For Brooke's run, maybe Alexis drops the tiny in Brooke's shoe, she feels a "rock" in her shoe part way through her run, takes it out to realize it's a tiny, then decides that that's exactly what she needs right now, as her athletic thong is riding up and distracting her during her run. Then she drops him in her thong and tells him to handle it or else.
3. Maybe Brooke has a toe ring that's just a tiny wrapped around her toe with his hands tied to his legs?
Author's Response:
You know I actually didn't think about naming chapters but I 100% agree it definitely makes it easier I'm going to start doing that. I haven't 100% decided what chapter 3 is yet I'm starting writing it tomorrow. But I really like that pebble idea ;)
Date: November 15 2019 9:25 PM Title: Meet our main characters
Reading the other reviews I just noticed you asked for some suggestions. Here are a few if you do not mind.
What ever happens to Riku, no matter what another girl does with him, he always is handed back to Alexis to live out his life in her asshole. Just a pleasant thought.
Since the shrinking men are resiliant, perhaps swallowing them, they travel the girls' stomach and intestines, only to be pooped out alive and healthy ready for further use / abuse.
Alexis wears not one, but a dozen men at any given time. In her bra, under her breasts, in her panty crotch, as another reviewer suggested as body jewelry {as a living belly botton piercing}, in her shoes {perhaps in hollows cut out beneath her insoles, with sizes ranging from a centimeter (1/2") to six inches, the amount in either shoe can vary, or perhaps the amount / size varying between different pairs of shoes, especially if the shrunken men are kept inside permantly only to be changed out when Alexis gets new shoes}.
Perhaps the "bigger" shrunken men she can put in a stiff harness {or on a rod inserted through their butts and out their mouths like a pig on a scqoor, remember they're resiliant} she can wear as part of a strap-on, making the 6" guy(s) her human dildos to have sex / anal sex at her party scene with her many female friends.
Just some thoughts, well, rather fantasies to think about.
BTW, Riku's in her butt, so fart stuff may offend some it's still fun.
Author's Response:
Hey thanks for your reviews! I always take writing advice especially the grammatical and continuity stuff. As far as Riku's exact size, that's a hard one for me personally, especially writing because eveeybody likes a little different and 1inches or 3 inches to goddesses is nothing but to us bugs it's everything, so I'll work on being a little more exact with that. But as far as your ideas go, I think you're going to LOVE chapters 2-4(ish.) We meet a new character next chapter and she may be your favorite. It should be up in a day or two.
Date: November 15 2019 8:39 PM Title: Meet our main characters
A young woman performing analvore never gets tiring. It's simply too popular and interesting a fantasy for us tiny wannabes.
It would be nice to find out if and where Alexis might be wearing another tiny, or perhaps tinies.
Feeding disobedient tinies to her cat seems, well oddly enough perverse, rather than her simply swallowing them herself. Hopefully such a waste of a tiny being fed to her cat never happened and is only a threat, as she either may eat them herself or just keep them locked away in punishment in order to rehabilitate them. But hey, it's your story and it's just fine the way you are writing it.
At one point Alexis threatens to squash Riku like a bug; yet you write that shrunken men are resiliant. Would he be squashed and killed, or squashed and reform?
You state Riku is only 3 inches, yet describe him and his sorroundings as if he is 1 inch or less {e.g. the deep valleys of the tiled floor, Alexis' shoes hundreds of times bigger than Riku}. Just how small is Riku?
Aside from very few grammatical errors {that's just me being nitpicky, your grammar is fine} you have a most interesting and enjoyable story.
[Report This]Date: November 14 2019 10:01 PM Title: Meet our main characters
Loved the first chapter! Butt content is exclent, glad there was no toilet / farting stuff.
As for the future, I'd love to see any of the following:
- Shrunken man sewn into clothing (preferably back of a thong)
- A couple who is dating and the guy shrinks while they're in the bedroom, prompting the girl to decide he will be her new dildo/butt plug instead.
- A tiny attached to a piercing, like a tongue ring
Author's Response:
I absolutely love all three of these. Might see one or two of them in the next several chapters. Thanks for reviewing it really helps my writing process!
[Report This]Date: November 14 2019 4:19 PM Title: Meet our main characters
very interesting a bit short looking forward for more, would really enjoy some more cruel plots, unaware, ass, maybe even shrinking more.
Author's Response:
Youre going to love next chapter, we get to see the cruel side of Alexis, his previously thought sweet co worker, and the psychological damage its going to put on Riku. Thanks for reviewin! i appreciate the feedback
[Report This]Date: November 14 2019 3:12 PM Title: Meet our main characters
I'm loving this already I can't wait to see where you take this story👍👍
Author's Response:
Thanks! I appreciatethe review, I promise youre going to love where this story goes, if you want to see anything specific let me know, I'm going to do my best to incorporate everything at some point.
[Report This]Date: November 14 2019 3:08 PM Title: Meet our main characters
So far this is amazing!!! Lots of ass and maybe some farts lol. But definitely LOTS of giantess booty content 😍🍑. And keep the chapters LONG and detailed!
Author's Response:
Youre my kind of guy lol I will be exploring all areas of giantess content for this story, but I especially am fond of the booty. Long chapters are a bit of a struggle for me, but thats my plan with this story is to push myself as a writer and really go for length and detail. Thanks for reviewing!