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Date: November 17 2019 9:48 PM Title: Alexis's playtime

Remember, always write for yourself first and foremost; that keeps it real.

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: November 17 2019 8:16 PM Title: Alexis's playtime

Really nice chapter.

I have to say I like Odysseus's ideas.  I also have to say a lot depends on Rikus' new size.  To be Alexis' buttplug, 3" makes a lot of sense, especially considering Riku felt so "bothered" at not being noticed stuffed in Alexis' cleavage so much so that Brooke did not even notice him in there.

As far as where Alexis hides Riku on Brooke, even at 1" or less, the ability of Alexis to slip Riku inside Brookes' "tight sports bra" or "tight yoga shorts" seems remote.  Though dropping him inside Brookes' awaiting jogging sneakers would make a lot of sense for a tiny of 1" or less.

At 1", Brooke could easily not notice Riku till she was running and mistake him for a pebble; but her sneakers are probably already full of 1" tiny men sewn into the insoles so he'd almost be negliable.

At 3", Brooke might think her sweat sock is bunched up under her toes.  She ignores it at first, then notices it wiggling annoyingly as she is running.  Going along Odysseus' idea, she could take off her sneaker, discover Riku, and stuff him down the back of her thong.

Staying with this scenario, Riku could discover a group of other tiny men stuffed in the back of Brookes' thong, and the addition of him at his size along with both the pressure of Brookes' thong and her jogging cause several tinies to be forced inside her asshole {which Brooke feels and enjoys}.

I also like Odysseus' idea of a tiny as a toe ring {one of my pseudonyms' is "HERToeRing"}, only with the stipulation that the tinys' head is wedged firmly in the space between her pinky and ring toe so that all he senses is the space between those two toes and their sweat and toe jam {YUMMY!}.

One idea, before Alexis drops Riku in one of Brookes' stank sneakers, she whispers to Riku "If you decide to come back to me, you do so with the acceptance you are to live in my ass as my buttplug.  I will not shove you up there again.  It's up to you to crawl inside of my asshole on your own, however you need to do it, you are to do it head first".

After suffering Brookes' sadism {what ever hijinks she bring upon him, perhaps peeing on him after she gets home after her long jog, or stuffing him in the front of her sweaty thong as she rubs out a few orgasms, without bothering to shower, then fooleshly falling asleep thinking Riku will still be stuck in her panties when she wakes up}, Riku sneaks away and works his way to Alexis' room, where she is in bed falling asleep.  Riku climbs up her bed and under her covers, gazing in amazement at her long, sexy legs till he reaches her buttcheeks.  He works his way up one of her buttcheeks, then squirms between her cheeks and head first inside her asshole as he not only accepts but embraces his life as Alexis' buttplug.

As Alexis is dozing off, she feels Riku squirm his way between her tight buttcheeks then up her asshole.  She smiles, not bothering to acknowledge him nor his existance, and she falls asleep knowing her buttplug has come home.

These are some ideas; but I would like to convey the advice another writter here at this site gave me early on {yes, I a have a few stories under the penname D W (Dark Writer from WritingDotCom) you may want to read if you have time to waste}.  The advice she gave me was write for yourself.  You will never please all of your readers, so simply write for your own pleasure and those who appreciate your style and subject matter will do so with the profound knowledge you are writing what and as you yourself believe in.



Author's Response:

Dude I love your in depth reviews it makes me want to write more, thank you. I am starting to have a solid idea of what chapter 3 is going to be, and I promise you Riku will make his way back to Alexis. The question you may want to ask though is 1) how long until he does 2) in what condition and 3) What's Alexis plan for him? 

And as for size, next chapter i have a plan to retcon that slightly I'm going to re establish his size as 1". For my writing style it will work better having him slightly smaller. 

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