Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: March 06 2020 6:53 PM Title: Eternity with your Goddess

I wasn't expecting him to be Brooke's forever, but I really like the idea.

I really love the concept that Brooke can bring him back from any form of death, and reincarnate him anyplace she so desires.  That's pretty hot.

I do have to ask, if Brooke can bring him back "anyplace" she wants, can Brooke also bring him back as any 'object' she desires?  Imagine if Brooke turns him into a cracker another girl is eating, or a slug another girl is about to step upon, or even a pair of panties or a buttplug another girl is going to wear.

What ever she does, it sounds like one fun party they are going to have together.

There were a few grammatical errors; but as you explained you were in a hurry to get this out.

I enjoyed the music, though don't know exactly where it is to be played in relationship to your story.

Author's Response:

Hi, yeah I didn't go through this one as much as normal I really wanted to update it. And "forever" is a strong term ;) as far as the music it was more juts an interesting touch with the more witchcraft chapter it was intended to be played with the chapter, I'm thinking of adding a song every chapter. And I've been considering the object side of things, I haven't decided yet to be honest. On that note, the next chapter should be up within a week at absolute most. Work is kicking my butt but I've got a good chunk written so we shall see :)