[Report This]Date: January 19 2021 5:07 AM Title: Day 9: Clothing Haul
Loved this chapter. Have to admit, I was expecting Jordan to be a little mischievous in the changing room, but her mischief is coming hopefully. The uncomfortable and awkward situations you put Reece in, are great. I'd love to see Reece get worn again (maybe in the blue dress Olivia bought to help act as a push up bra lol) (the romper Olivia wore, stuffed Reece in, and then buttoned up hiding him from view was my favorite scene so far) and sat on in the car. Love how v2 is going and can't wait to read what happens next.
Author's Response:
those two exact things (being worn in the dress and getting sat on in the car again) are coming in the next two chapters! thats specifically why i had her pick out the dress at the last minute haha. thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: January 18 2021 3:40 AM Title: Day 9: Clothing Haul
This chapter was great. His embarrassment as she changes clothes was hilarious and also well written. I was expecting her to be wearing a thong for Reese's maximum embarrassment but it was still great. Looking forward to the next chapter :D
Author's Response:
thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: January 18 2021 3:32 AM Title: Day 9: Clothing Haul
Very well written. I wonder though, just how wild things will get in this version. Perhaps version three will be the one for me?
Author's Response:
maybe, maybe not. but thanks for checking it out nonetheless :)