Reviewer: Shaman Signed [Report This]
Date: December 30 2019 9:34 AM Title: Clone #3 and me

As for a possible suggestion should you continue the story, maybe have her carrying the new one around in her panties for a while as she does something (just doing it during the day). I guess that might make sense since this is the original and last copy of her boyfriend, which means that she would actually kill 'him' instead of his clones.

Maybe she can lie and tell a friend / family member that he is also a clone (after that first suggestion possibly), or she'll try and snatch other people's clones (like her boyfriend's friend's clones if they have any)

But Im mostly curious to see what you'll write next :)

Reviewer: Donnert Signed [Report This]
Date: December 29 2019 4:28 AM Title: Clone #3 and me

This is a fantastic story so far. In my opinion, you have set yourself up well with an open ended story line. The usage of clones allowed destruction while the transference of memories gives future shrinking of the protagonist suspenseful anticipation. Will he shrink down just as the memories come and now knows what he is in for? We'll see. 

I very much enjoy the concept of mistaken identity and it looks like this is where we are headed. If he is mistaken as a clone, who knows what will happen. If you're looking for suggestions, I wouldn't be opposed to some toilet stuff, unaware or aware. Also, love the idea of the tiny guy getting used, thought of as a clone, and maybe being given away to another giantess.

Excellent work. Keep going.