Reviews For Syze
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Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 01 2020 6:10 PM Title: What Happens in Vegas...

"How had it gone so wrong so quickly?"

Good question. My guess; making changes to his settings while he was shrunk probably set off some immediate red flags in the system. Someone must have been tasked to review the changes, saw the extent (18 months instead of just 8 hours or so, plus basically hitting "Select All" on the check boxes) and flagged it for law enforcement.



Author's Response:

That's more or less what I imagined happened. I figured that it would be nice to have a vignestte that demonstrated the automated enforcement that Anita crowed about at the beginnig.

Reviewer: Thatgirlyouknow Signed [Report This]
Date: February 18 2020 5:50 PM Title: Enter Anita Lee

*Fist Bump*

I like it! I'm digging your approach, keep it up!



Author's Response:

Awesome! Your own corner of depravity was my inspiration, so I can only thank you for that!

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 29 2020 2:43 PM Title: Rule 34

@ Tallie:
Seems that's what I get for writing reviews while being half asleep. I kinda misunderstood the world of the story, my apologies for that.

Seems like this Anita has that banker wrapped around her fingers. I like how casually she defies him. If only he could also be shrunken.

Its nice we also get to see some of the other stories in this world! 

Thank you for writing and hopefully until next time!



Author's Response:

Glad to hear you're enjoying it! I'll keep it going for sure. The format allows for plenty of side-stories.

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 27 2020 10:26 PM Title: Rule 34

Wow, this story is amazing. Love the Anita story line the most but all the chapters have been excellent. 

Keep up the great work! 



Author's Response:

Thanks, man. It's great to hear you enjoy it!

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22 2020 10:06 PM Title: I Accept the New Terms of Service

Wow, that was an amazing chapter! Great detail, almost made me not want to be Braden, almost. 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it! I'm invoking Palahniuk-style cycnical realism a bit more than necessary, but it's fun to do so.

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2020 2:23 PM Title: Two New Permanent Playmates

I love how these women just predatory steal people basically from the streets. Makes them seem really dominant and powerful. This makes them so hot combined with their healthy dose of corporate doublespeak.

Thank you for writing and I'm looking forward to the next one!



Author's Response:

I'm not trying to create a world where the women have total power over men. There is just one who does, and she is the focus of my story. Everything else is, ostensibly, totally consensual.

But I'm glad you like it! I've enjoyed writing it.

Reviewer: fatal15 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 15 2020 4:25 PM Title: Enter Anita Lee

Would love to see more of this story!

Author's Response:

That's great to hear! There will be more. It just might take some time.

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2020 4:02 PM Title: Enter Anita Lee

Very well written story. I like how this woman uses corporate doublespeak to justify her abuse and doesn't let anyone stop her.

Thank you for writing and I'm looking forward to the next one!



Author's Response:

I do what I can. I appreciate the praise, and I hope that I'll be able to finish it to your satisfaction.

Reviewer: KYo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08 2020 2:27 PM Title: Enter Anita Lee

Good first chapter. Intrested to see where this goes



Author's Response:

I have to credit 'Thatgirlyouknow' with the idea. If it turns out well, then it will only be thanks to them.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08 2020 5:51 AM Title: Enter Anita Lee

Now this is a story worth following.



Author's Response:

I figured, hey, I have three unfinished stories already, might as well add a fourth, right?

Reviewer: Poe00069 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2020 3:11 AM Title: Enter Anita Lee

Great start and great topic! Looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

Glad to hear you like it!

Reviewer: osok Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 07 2020 10:35 PM Title: Enter Anita Lee

WOW

I’m always so impressed with your imagery. The buildup in this first chapter...kinda cruel
If this was the teaser sample of what’s to come then you’ve outdone yourself. A 9/10 for sure

Thank you for sharing...whatever color “entertained” is...that is the color I am

Author's Response:

Thanks! I think, with this one, the goal is to move the slider a bit away from the erotic and more towards the characters and the story.

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